Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğal ancak tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var; daha doğrudan bir konu cümlesi kurup, bir veya iki destekleyici neden verin. Örneğin geçmiş alışkanlıklarınızdan bahsederken zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ("we don't have" yerine "we didn't have"). Cümleleri kısaltarak 2-3 cümle içinde tutun ve gereksiz tekrarları kaldırın.

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information better. When I was a child we didn’t have computers at home or school, so I learned to write everything by hand. For these reasons I still find handwriting more practical.

提案: Soruya doğrudan cevap vermemişsiniz; sınavda soruya net yanıt verin (ör. 'no, I don't type every day' veya 'yes, I use a laptop'). Ayrıca cümlede anlam hataları ve gereksiz tekrarlar var ('compete' yanlış kelime). Türkçede öneri: Soruyu ilk cümlede doğrudan cevaplayın, sonra kısa bir açıklama ekleyin. Kelime seçimine dikkat edin.

例: No, I don't type on a desktop or laptop every day; I usually write by hand. However, I sometimes use a laptop for emails and school assignments when necessary.

提案: Cevap uygun ve ilgili, fakat tekrarlar var ('used to play' iki kez) ve son kelime ('technical') bağlam dışı görünüyor. Zaman ifadesini net tutup, bir-iki destekleyici ayrıntı ekleyin (ör. hangi oyunlar ya da hangi beceriler). Bağlaç kullanarak akışı iyileştirin.

例: I learned to type at about eight years old. I spent a lot of time playing computer games, so I picked up typing skills informally by practicing shortcuts and fast keypresses while gaming.

提案: Cevap net ve faydalı yöntemler içeriyor, ama cümle çok uzun ve bazı ifadeler gereksiz ("because I can use computer"). Daha kısa cümleler kurun, bağlaçlarla mantığı güçlendirin ve spesifik örnekler verin (hangi web siteleri veya egzersiz türleri).

例: I improve my typing by doing online typing exercises and writing essays regularly. For example, I use typing websites to practice accuracy and time myself to increase speed.

× I prefer writing by hand because it's more convenient for me and when I was a child I used to write everything by hand because we don't have a computer at home or school. As a result, it is handwriting.

✓ I prefer writing by hand because it's more convenient for me. When I was a child, I used to write everything by hand because we didn't have a computer at home or at school. Therefore, I prefer handwriting.

Pronoun and tense inconsistency: 'we don't have' should match past tense 'when I was a child', so use 'we didn't have'. Also the sentence was long and unclear; splitting into two sentences improves clarity and cohesion. Use 'Therefore, I prefer handwriting' to express the result. Suggestion: Keep tense consistent within the same time frame and avoid switching between past and present without reason.

× I prefer writing by hand because it's very convenient and practical for me. When I was a child, I used to write by hand because I didn't have to compete or smartphone.

✓ I prefer writing by hand because it's very convenient and practical for me. When I was a child, I used to write by hand because I didn't have a computer or a smartphone.

Wrong word and article use: 'compete' is incorrect; likely intended 'computer'. Also missing article before 'smartphone' — use 'a smartphone'. Keep past tense 'didn't have' consistent with 'when I was a child'. Suggestion: Use correct vocabulary and include articles for singular countable nouns (a computer, a smartphone).

× In the past, when I was 8 years old, I used to play computer games and I used to spend a lot of time playing computer games, so I picked up keyboard skills informally while practicing games and technical.

✓ In the past, when I was eight years old, I used to play computer games and spent a lot of time doing so, so I picked up keyboard skills informally while practicing games and learning technical skills.

Repetition and word choice issues: repeating 'I used to' and 'playing computer games' is redundant. 'Technical' alone is vague and treated as a noun incorrectly; use 'technical skills'. Also numbers under ten are usually written as words in formal writing ('eight'). Suggestion: Avoid redundancy by combining clauses and choose correct noun phrases ('technical skills') to complete meaning.

× I practice typing by writing a lot of essays and doing online typing exercises, which helps me type faster and with fewer mistakes because I can use computer and this is very convenient.

✓ I practice typing by writing many essays and doing online typing exercises, which helps me type faster and make fewer mistakes because I can use a computer, which is very convenient.

Article and word choice errors: 'a computer' is needed for a singular countable noun. 'With fewer mistakes' is acceptable but 'make fewer mistakes' is more natural. 'This is very convenient' can be linked as a relative clause. Also 'a lot of essays' -> 'many essays' is more natural with countable nouns. Suggestion: Use correct articles and natural verb collocations ('make mistakes'), and connect ideas with relative clauses for smoother sentences.