Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make your answer more concise, correct grammar errors, and add a brief reason with clearer linking words. Avoid repetition and unnecessary fillers. Use one topic sentence then one supporting detail. For example, say you prefer handwriting for Korean because of cultural/visual reasons and typing for English because it’s easier to edit.

例: I prefer handwriting for Korean because the characters look neater when I write by hand. However, I prefer typing for English since it’s easy to correct spelling mistakes and faster for long texts.

提案: Answer directly with one clear topic sentence about your current situation, correct tense mistakes, and give one supporting detail. Remove fillers and unnecessary context. Use linking words like ‘but’ or ‘however’ correctly.

例: I usually type on a laptop keyboard every day because I used my laptop for all my university assignments. However, when I work outside I sometimes use a desktop or public computer.

提案: Be more certain and use clear past tense. Start with a direct topic sentence giving an approximate time, then add one brief supporting detail about where you learned. Avoid hesitations and incorrect verbs.

例: I learned to type at elementary school during computer classes. We practiced typing skills in class, which helped me become comfortable with the keyboard early on.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence about how you improved, correct tense and grammar, and add a specific method or example of practice. Use linking words like ‘because’ or ‘by’ to show reason or method.

例: I improved my English typing mainly during college in Australia because I had to type many assignments. By typing daily and using spell-check tools, my speed and accuracy increased.

× If I write Korean, I prefer handwriting, but if I write English I prefer typing because the typing is easy to erase and fix the if I misspelled.

✓ If I write in Korean, I prefer handwriting, but if I write in English I prefer typing because typing is easy to erase and fix if I misspell.

Multiple issues: missing preposition 'in' before languages (preposition error — ID 11) and unnecessary definite article 'the' before 'typing' (article error — ID 22); repetition and misplaced 'the' and incorrect past form 'misspelled' used after conditional (verb tense/form — use base form 'misspell'). Suggestion: use 'in Korean/in English', remove 'the' before uncountable noun 'typing', and use base verb after 'if' for general present condition. Grammar problem type IDs: 11,22,6,8

× Uh outside is depends on my occupation but currently I was a student and in this week I just graduate.

✓ It depends on my occupation when I'm outside, but currently I am a student and this week I just graduated.

Errors: incorrect word order and auxiliary use 'is depends' should be 'depends' (subject-verb agreement/word order — ID 27/26), wrong tense 'was' for current state (past tense used instead of present — ID 6), incorrect time expression 'in this week' should be 'this week' and 'just graduate' must be past 'graduated' for completed action. Suggestion: keep present simple for general facts ('depends'), use present continuous or present simple for current status ('I am a student'), and use past simple for completed recent actions ('I just graduated'). Grammar problem type IDs: 6,27,5

× But when I study in my uni I use the laptop keyboards every day.

✓ But when I studied at my university I used laptop keyboards every day.

Problems: 'uni' is informal and should be 'university'; preposition 'in' with 'study' is acceptable but 'at university' is more natural (preposition — ID 11). Tense inconsistency: speaker refers to past habit, so use past 'studied' and 'used' (past tense issue — ID 5). Also 'laptop keyboards' could be 'a laptop keyboard' when referring to a personal device, or plural if referring to many; context implies personal use so 'a laptop keyboard' or 'laptop keyboards' both possible. Suggested correction uses plural to match 'every day' at university using multiple keyboards; alternatively: 'I used a laptop' or 'I used my laptop keyboard.' Grammar problem type IDs: 1,5,11

× I'm not quite sure when I run uh uh the typing of keyboard, but I assume that I when I ignored the elementary school we have, we had the computer class and I run the typing from the class.

✓ I'm not quite sure when I started typing on the keyboard, but I assume it was in elementary school when we had computer class and I learned typing in that class.

Many structure and verb form errors: 'run the typing' is incorrect — use 'started typing' or 'learned to type' (verb form — ID 9/8). 'When I ignored the elementary school we have' is nonsensical; likely intended 'when I was in elementary school' (sentence structure — ID 26). Use past tense 'we had' and 'I learned' for past events (past tense issue — ID 5). Preposition 'on the keyboard' is correct. Suggestion: simplify to 'I started typing... in elementary school... I learned typing in that class.' Grammar problem type IDs: 26,9,5,11

× For English typing I improved since when I study in Australia college because we had so many assignment and we have to type the English every day, so I think I improved the skills since when I was in uni.

✓ My English typing improved when I studied at college in Australia because we had so many assignments and we had to type in English every day, so I think I improved my skills while I was at university.

Errors: tense inconsistencies — 'improved since when I study' mixes past and present; use past 'studied' and 'improved' (past tense — ID 5). Article and preposition errors: 'Australia college' should be 'college in Australia' or 'college in Australia' (preposition — ID 11; article — ID 22). 'assignment' should be plural 'assignments' (singular/plural — ID 1). 'type the English' should be 'type in English' (preposition and article — IDs 11,22). Use 'while I was at university' or 'when I was at uni' for past time reference. Suggestion: keep past tense throughout and correct prepositions and plural nouns.' }]}}