Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and clear: start with a direct topic sentence stating preference, then give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and grammar errors (e.g., "they're come become more common"). Use correct verb forms and articles.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because digital communication is much more common now. For example, most people use phones and computers to send messages and do schoolwork, so typing is a practical skill. Therefore, I practice typing regularly so I can reply quickly and accurately.

提案: Answer directly and correct word choice and grammar: state which device you use, then give specific details (how often, why). Replace incorrect words ("lymph node keyboard") and fix verb forms and prepositions.

例: I usually type on a laptop because I carry it with me everywhere. When I go to class I take my laptop to take notes and complete exercises, which helps me follow the teacher more easily.

提案: Give a clear time reference and one concise reason with correct grammar and vocabulary. Avoid repetition and incorrect phrases (e.g., "top on the keyboard keyboard", "science technology"). Use linking words like "because" or "since" to connect ideas.

例: I started learning to type when I was in primary school, about ten years ago. At that time computers were becoming more common, so schools began teaching typing as an important skill for studying and communicating online.

提案: Provide a clear topic sentence about your methods, then give one or two specific activities with brief explanations. Correct vocabulary and grammar ("Steam", "Typing of Death", "typing accuracy") and avoid vague phrases like "you will be short".

例: I improve my typing mainly by practicing regularly and using typing games. For instance, I play a game on Steam called Typing of the Dead, which forces me to type accurately and quickly; this helps me increase both my speed and accuracy.

× I like typing more because this is with the social network, they're come become more common.

✓ I like typing more because social networks have become more common.

The original uses incorrect pronouns and awkward phrasing ('this is with the social network, they're come become more common'). Replace 'this is with the social network' with 'social networks' and use the present perfect 'have become' to indicate a change over time. Also avoid contraction 'they're' for impersonal reference; use the plural noun 'social networks'.

× A lot of people use technological devices like computer or phones a little more.

✓ A lot of people use technological devices like computers or phones more often.

The noun 'computer' should be plural to match 'a lot of people' (singular/plural agreement). The adverb phrase 'a little more' is awkward; use 'more often' to indicate increased frequency.

× So typing is an important skill we have to handle and I must practice typing in that case I can answer the question immediate.

✓ So typing is an important skill we must develop, and I must practice typing so I can answer questions immediately.

'We have to handle' is unnatural; 'must develop' or 'must learn' fits. Run-on sentence; split with 'and' and 'so'. 'Question' should be plural 'questions' and 'immediate' is an adjective; use the adverb 'immediately'.

× I always type on the laptop keyboard because my computer is always stay with us.

✓ I always type on my laptop because my computer always stays with me.

Use possessive 'my laptop' and change 'stay with us' to 'stays with me' for correct subject reference and present simple agreement 'stays'.

× Sometimes I go to classes, I will take my lymph node keyboard to answer the question and make some notes.

✓ Sometimes when I go to class, I take my laptop keyboard to answer questions and take notes.

'Classes' can be 'class' or 'classes' but 'when I go to class' is more natural. 'Will' is unnecessary for habitual action; use present simple 'take'. 'lymph node keyboard' is likely a mistranscription; replace with 'laptop keyboard'. Use plural 'questions' and 'take notes' for the common collocation.

× In that case I can understand what our teacher talking about in the classes.

✓ In that case I can understand what our teacher is talking about in class.

Missing auxiliary 'is' for present continuous ('is talking'). 'Our teacher' is acceptable but 'the teacher' could also be used; 'in the classes' is unnatural—use 'in class'.

× I remember I started learning top on the keyboard keyboard when I was in the primary school about 10 years ago.

✓ I remember I started learning to type on the keyboard when I was in primary school about 10 years ago.

'top on the keyboard keyboard' contains errors: use 'to type' for the infinitive and remove the duplicate word 'keyboard'. 'Primary school' does not need 'the' in this context.

× 10 years ago, the computer and the science technology become more common, so every people need to learn how to tap on the keyboard to answer the question and follow the tab.

✓ Ten years ago, computers and technology became more common, so everyone needed to learn how to type on the keyboard to answer questions and follow lessons.

Time marker '10 years ago' requires past tense 'became'. Use plural 'computers' and 'technology' (not 'science technology'). 'Every people' is incorrect; use 'everyone'. 'Tap on the keyboard' should be 'type on the keyboard'. 'Follow the tab' is unclear; 'follow lessons' or 'follow the lesson' fits better. Maintain past tense consistency with 'needed'. },{