Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答总体清晰，但存在语法和表达错误，且有重复与啰嗦。建议：1) 开头用一句主题句直接回答并使用正确语法，例如“I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember better.” 2) 用一到两句具体支持细节并用连接词（for example / moreover / however）保持连贯。3) 注意动词形式和句子完整，例如“remember things easier”应为“remember things more easily”；最后一句要完整表达原因。

例: I prefer handwriting because it helps me remember information more easily. For example, when I take notes in lectures or write in my diary, I concentrate more and process ideas better. However, if I type for a long time, I tend to be distracted and find it harder to recall details.

提案: 回答直接且连贯，但可以更自然并加入具体细节以体现词汇广度。建议：1) 保持主题句简明，然后用连接词如 “because / for example / so” 扩展。2) 加入具体场景或频率，例如“几乎每天”或“for study and work”。3) 避免重复（如重复说便携），使用同义词丰富表达。

例: I usually type on a laptop because it’s compact and highly portable. For example, I take it to lectures and cafes almost every day for studying and writing assignments, so it’s much more convenient than a desktop.

提案: 回答包含必要信息但句子不完整、语法错误较多，且缺少连贯结尾。建议：1) 用完整句子说明时间（when）并补充原因或影响。2) 修正语法，如“use computer”→“use computers”，以及完成未完结的句子。3) 可加入具体细节（练习频率或学习内容）并使用连接词。

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school during our computer lessons. The teacher taught us basic typing techniques, and I practiced regularly by chatting with friends online, which really helped me improve my speed and accuracy.

提案: 回答思路清楚但有语法和词汇小错误，且可提供更多具体方法与频率。建议：1) 修正单复数和动词搭配，如“This activities”→“These activities”。2) 提供更具体的练习方法或频率，例如“每天练习10分钟”或使用打字练习软件。3) 使用连接词使句子更流畅。

例: To improve my typing, I practise regularly by chatting with friends online and keeping a daily diary in a word processor. In addition, I use an online typing tutor for 10–15 minutes a day to work on accuracy and speed.

× I prefer handwriting because it feels more tactile and remember things easier.

✓ I prefer handwriting because it feels more tactile and helps me remember things more easily.

句子中原本使用的动词短语结构不完整且副词位置和形式不当。“remember”需要有主语和助动结构，这里应使用“helps me remember”以表达“帮助我记住”；“easier”应为副词形式“more easily”来修饰动词“remember”。改为“helps me remember things more easily”既语法正确又更自然。

× By contrast, if I type for a long period, I lose the touch with handwriting and the difficult to recall.

✓ By contrast, if I type for a long period, I lose the touch with handwriting and find it difficult to recall.

原句中“the difficult to recall”结构不完整且缺少动词，应该用动词短语“find it difficult to recall”或“have difficulty recalling”。此外“lose the touch with handwriting”虽可理解，但更自然常用“lose my touch with handwriting”。总体需把副词/形容词的搭配改为正确的动词短语。

× I can easily put it in my bag and take it to a cafe or at university to use it.

✓ I can easily put it in my bag and take it to a cafe or to university to use it.

并列的短语中介词应保持一致。原句“to a cafe or at university”在并列时混用“to”和“at”不恰当，应统一为“to a cafe or to university”。在英语中以“to university”表达“去大学（上课/使用）”是常见用法。

× For me, I usually type on a laptop because it's smaller and more portable than the desktop.

✓ For me, I usually type on a laptop because it's smaller and more portable than a desktop.

比较时名词前的冠词使用不当。原句用“the desktop”暗示特定的台式机，但句意是泛指台式机作为一种类型，应使用不定冠词“a desktop”。同时时态“usually type”正确，无需改动。

× We had a computer class where the teacher showed us how to use computer and practice typing skills.

✓ We had a computer class where the teacher showed us how to use computers and practice typing skills.

这里的名词“computer”应使用复数“computers”或在前加冠词“the computer”。句意是在课堂上学习如何使用电脑，通常用复数表示电脑这一类事物。时态“had…showed”正确。

× I also practiced a lot by chatting with friends online, which really.

✓ I also practiced a lot by chatting with friends online, which really helped.

原句“which really.”是残缺句，缺少谓语部分，导致句子不完整。需要补充动词短语如“helped”或“improved my skills”以完成从句。此处用过去时与前文“practiced”保持一致。

× To improve my typing, I usually chat with my friends online and keep a diary using the Office app. This activities give me regular practice and help improve my speed and accuracy.

✓ To improve my typing, I usually chat with my friends online and keep a diary using the Office app. These activities give me regular practice and help improve my speed and accuracy.

原句中“This activities”主谓不一致，应将指示代词和名词的数保持一致，复数名词“activities”应对应复数代词“These”。此外句首动名词结构“To improve my typing”与后文时态一致，其他部分语法正确。