Part 1
試験官
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
受験者
In the past, I prefer handwriting because I think it can make me more, uh, focus on the knowledge. But recently I prefer the typewriting, uh, typing because, uh, many things, uh, should be right by computer.
試験官
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
受験者
Maybe laptop? Nowadays I studying the IELTS test and uh, I should use a computer to write down the notes and to have a task test.
試験官
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
受験者
When I was young, in my primary school, we have the lessons about computer and at that time I learned how to use computer, how to use the keyboard.
試験官
How do you improve your typing?
受験者
I think one of the most important way is practice. I always practice every day by computer and sometimes I usually practice it on my phones.
Do you prefer typing or handwriting?
スコア: 62.0提案: 注意时态和语法一致性,减少填充词(如 uh),并用一到两句清晰说明原因与对比。可用连接词(however, because)使表达更连贯。保持句子数量不超过5句。
例: I used to prefer handwriting because it helped me concentrate better. However, recently I prefer typing because most tasks need to be done on a computer, which is faster and more convenient.
Do you type on a desktop or laptop keyboard every day?
スコア: 58.0提案: 回答要更直接并注意语法(如现在进行时或一般现在时),避免不确定词(maybe)并补充具体频率或原因。使用连接词说明用途或习惯。
例: I usually type on a laptop every day because I study for the IELTS on it. I use it to take notes and complete practice tests online.
When did you learn how to type on a keyboard?
スコア: 70.0提案: 时间表达清晰,但注意时态一致(过去时)和句子简洁。可以加入一点细节说明学习内容或持续时间,使内容更具体。
例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. We had computer lessons where the teacher taught us basic typing skills and how to use the keyboard.
How do you improve your typing?
スコア: 64.0提案: 注意名词单复数和搭配(ways, on my phone),减少重复词(always/sometimes/usually),并给出具体方法或练习内容以增加细节。
例: One of the most important ways to improve typing is daily practice. I practice on my computer using typing exercises and sometimes I use typing apps on my phone to build speed and accuracy.
× In the past, I prefer handwriting because I think it can make me more, uh, focus on the knowledge.
✓ In the past, I preferred handwriting because I thought it helped me focus more on the material.
这是现在时与过去时混用的问题。句子开头说“In the past”(在过去),描述过去习惯或感受时应使用过去时。因此将“prefer”改为“preferred”,“think”改为“thought”,“can make me more focus on the knowledge”改为更地道的表达 “helped me focus more on the material”。另外“more focus on”词序不当,使用“focus more on”更自然。
× But recently I prefer the typewriting, uh, typing because, uh, many things, uh, should be right by computer.
✓ But recently I prefer typing because many things should be done on a computer.
句中时间状语“recently”表示最近的持续情况,应使用现在时“prefer”是可以的,但“typewriting”用法不常见,改为“typing”。“should be right by computer”结构不正确,意图是“应该在电脑上完成”,应改为“should be done on a computer”。
× Maybe laptop? Nowadays I studying the IELTS test and uh, I should use a computer to write down the notes and to have a task test.
✓ Maybe a laptop. Nowadays I'm studying for the IELTS test and I have to use a computer to take notes and do practice tests.
句中缺少助动词“am”导致动词形式错误,应为“I'm studying”。“studying the IELTS test”习惯表达为“studying for the IELTS test”。“write down the notes”更自然为“take notes”。“to have a task test”不自然,意指做练习测验,应为“do practice tests”或“take practice tests”。同时补上不定冠词“a laptop”。
× When I was young, in my primary school, we have the lessons about computer and at that time I learned how to use computer, how to use the keyboard.
✓ When I was young, in primary school, we had lessons about computers and at that time I learned how to use a computer and how to use the keyboard.
句中描述过去发生的事情,应使用过去时“had”而不是“have”。名词“computer”在泛指课程内容时通常用复数“computers”或在具体指一台时用不定冠词“a computer”。并在并列短语中使用“and”连接两项。调整为过去时态一致且冠词使用正确。
× I think one of the most important way is practice.
✓ I think one of the most important ways is practice.
这里是名词短语“one of the most important ways”,“one of the”后面应接复数名词,因此“way”应改为复数“ways”。原句语法错误属于动名词/名词形式使用问题,应保持数的一致。
× I always practice every day by computer and sometimes I usually practice it on my phones.
✓ I always practice every day on the computer and sometimes I practice on my phone.
“practice by computer”不太自然,应为“practice on the computer”。句中同时出现“sometimes”与“usually”导致语义冲突,且“practice it on my phones”中“it”指代不明,“phones”复数也不合常用表达,改为“practice on my phone”。保持时态为一般现在时以表达习惯性动作。