Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be clearer and more coherent: start with a direct topic sentence, avoid filler words and unclear phrases, and give one or two specific reasons using linking words. Correct vocabulary (e.g., "type" not "tie") and avoid unintelligible fragments.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and easier to edit. For example, when I type I can quickly correct mistakes and rearrange sentences, which saves time and improves clarity.

提案: Provide a concise direct answer, then give a clear reason with a linking word. Remove hesitation and fix grammar (use present simple correctly).

例: No, I don't use a desktop or laptop every day because I don't own one. Instead, I mainly type on my phone since it is more convenient and always with me.

提案: Answer directly with a time reference if possible, then explain briefly. Use correct tense and natural phrasing, and avoid vague statements like "you don't need especially skills."

例: I learned to type when I was a child, around primary school. It was quite easy to pick up because basic typing only needs practice and common computer familiarity.

提案: Give a clear method and specific detail: state the routine, use linking words to show result, and correct grammar. Mention measurable progress or examples.

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day, for about 20 minutes using typing apps and messages. As a result, my speed has increased and I make fewer mistakes than before.

× Like uh, you can easily tie when you need and TT9 don't improve your sentence. No.

✓ Like, uh, you can easily type when you need to, and it doesn't improve your sentence. No.

The student used 'tie' instead of the present participle/infinitive 'type' (spelling error) and omitted 'to' after 'need' which requires 'to' + verb. 'TT9' appears to be a transcription error and should be 'it' or 'it doesn't'; the verb 'do' must agree with singular subject so 'doesn't' is required. Suggestion: use the correct verb 'type', include 'to' after 'need' when followed by a verb, and use 'doesn't' for singular subjects. Grammar problem type ID:10

× I don't type on the desktop or laptop because I don't have it. I every day.

✓ I don't type on a desktop or laptop because I don't have one. Every day, I usually use only my phone because it's more convenient for me than a desktop.

The original has article errors and missing noun forms: 'the desktop or laptop' should be 'a desktop or laptop' and 'it' incorrectly refers back to two items; use 'one'. 'I every day' lacks a verb and proper adverb placement. Also added 'usually' from next sentence for natural flow. Suggestion: use appropriate indefinite articles for general items, use 'one' to replace a singular item already mentioned, and place time expressions correctly. Grammar problem type ID:22

× I usually use only my phone because it's more convenient for me than desktop like.

✓ I usually use only my phone because it's more convenient for me than a desktop.

The phrase 'desktop like' is ungrammatical; compare nouns directly with articles as needed. Use 'a desktop' to make the comparison clear. Suggestion: when comparing, include the article for the compared noun and remove filler word 'like'. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Uh, I learn how to type on the keyboard very easily because you don't need especially skills to do that.

✓ Uh, I learned how to type on the keyboard very easily because you don't especially need any skills to do that.

The event of learning is in the past, so 'learn' should be past tense 'learned'. Also, adverb placement: 'especially' should come before 'need' or before 'any skills'. Add 'any' before 'skills' for natural negative polarity. Suggestion: use past tense for past events and place adverbs near the verb; include 'any' with negative contexts. Grammar problem type ID:6

× I think it's basic skills for person.

✓ I think they're basic skills for a person.

Mismatch between singular 'it' and plural 'skills' and missing articles: 'basic skills' is plural so use 'they' or 'these'. Also 'for person' requires 'a person'. Suggestion: ensure pronouns agree in number with their referents and include appropriate articles. Grammar problem type ID:12

× Umm I just type in every day and this help me improve my skills.

✓ Umm I just type in every day and this helps me improve my skills.

Subject-verb agreement: 'this' (third person singular) requires 'helps' not 'help'. Also 'type in every day' is acceptable but could be 'type every day'. Suggestion: match verbs to their subjects in number and tense. Grammar problem type ID:6

× It's everyday it's gets faster.

✓ Every day it gets faster.

'Everyday' (one word) is an adjective meaning commonplace; use 'every day' (two words) as an adverbial phrase meaning each day. Also remove the extra 'it's' to form a single clause: 'it gets faster.' Suggestion: use 'every day' for frequency and avoid repeating subjects/auxiliaries. Grammar problem type ID:6