Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Улучшите структуру ответа: начните с чётного утверждения (topic sentence), затем добавьте 1–2 конкретных причины с плавными связками. Исправьте грамматические ошибки (например, “prefer handwriting” → “prefer handwriting” без артикля, “in the during the night” → “at night”) и уберите избыточность (“to write and to write”). Сделайте предложение короче — не более 3–4 предложений, используйте слова-связки: however, because, so. Пример фокусных фраз: I prefer handwriting for drafts because it helps me think; however, at night I type because it's faster and clearer.

例: I usually prefer handwriting for most of the day because it helps me organize my thoughts and makes editing easier. However, at night I tend to type because it's faster and more convenient when I work on my laptop.

提案: Сформулируйте прямой ответ сначала (Yes/No + краткое объяснение), затем приведите 1–2 конкретных деталей. Упростите фразы и исправьте порядок слов: “it depends on my routine”, “I set aside a few hours to type on my laptop”. Избегайте словосочетаний типа “in during limit of time”. Используйте связки: because, so, usually.

例: Not every day. It depends on my routine, but I usually set aside a couple of hours each evening to type on my laptop because I find it more comfortable for writing longer texts.

提案: Дайте чёткий ответ с указанием времени (topic sentence), затем уточните контекст. Уберите слова-паразиты (“exactly”, повторения “about when I was about”) и используйте правильные выражения: “in 11th grade” или “when I was 16”. Добавьте одну конкретную деталь о том, как вы учились (курсы, практика).

例: I learned to type during my school years, around 11th grade, when my parents bought me a laptop. I practiced a lot using online exercises and simple typing programs.

提案: Начните с прямого утверждения о методах (topic sentence), затем приведите 2 конкретных способов улучшения: упражнения, онлайн-тренажёры, практика с текстами. Исправьте выражения: “permanent exercising” → “regular practice”, “work laptops or a desktop” → “on my laptop or desktop”. Используйте связки: for example, by doing, so that. Держите ответ компактным и естественным.

例: I improve my typing through regular practice. For example, I use online typing exercises and type short articles every day so that my speed and accuracy gradually get better.

× Actually, it depends. So most of the day I prefer to handwriting to write and to write essays or other deadlines to note down.

✓ Actually, it depends. For most of the day I prefer handwriting when I write essays or need to take notes for deadlines.

The original uses an incorrect verb+ -ing structure: 'prefer to handwriting' mixes 'prefer to + infinitive' with a gerund. Use either 'prefer to write' or 'prefer handwriting'. Also word order and phrase choice were awkward ('to write essays or other deadlines to note down'); corrected to 'write essays or need to take notes for deadlines' for clarity and grammatical correctness. Suggestion: Use 'prefer + gerund' or 'prefer to + base verb' consistently and simplify sentence structure.

× However, in the during the night I prefer typing. It's easier and.

✓ However, during the night I prefer typing; it's easier.

The phrase 'in the during the night' is incorrect; use 'during the night' or 'at night'. The fragment 'It's easier and.' is incomplete; remove the conjunction or finish the comparison. Suggestion: Use complete clauses and correct time expressions like 'at night' or 'during the night'.

× No, I can't say every day because it's all up to my daily routine and I define some hours to work on a laptop on typing keywords and I use computer and laptop in during limit of time.

✓ No, I can't say I type every day because it depends on my daily routine; I set aside some hours to work on a laptop, typing keywords, and I use a computer or laptop within a limited time.

Problems include awkward phrasing and missing articles ('a computer'), wrong preposition 'in during', and unclear verb phrases. 'I define some hours' is unnatural; 'I set aside some hours' is correct. Use 'type every day' as a full clause. Suggestion: Use natural verbs for scheduling (set aside, allocate), include articles where needed, and correct prepositions ('within a limited time').

× Exactly, I learned about typing during my school years when I about when I was about intense or 11th grade at school and my parents bought a new laptop for me to learn typing.

✓ I learned to type during my school years, around 10th or 11th grade, when my parents bought a new laptop for me to practice typing.

Original has redundant and incorrect phrases ('learned about typing', 'when I about when I was about intense'). Use 'learned to type' or 'learned typing'. 'Intense' is wrong; likely 'tense' or 'ten' intended — corrected to '10th'. Use 'practice typing' instead of 'learn typing'. Suggestion: Use clear grade numbers ('10th or 11th grade'), and the infinitive 'learned to type' for correct expression.

× I have been improving my typing skills by permanent exercising to work laptops or a desktop.

✓ I have been improving my typing skills by practicing regularly on a laptop or a desktop.

'Permanent exercising' is unnatural; use 'practicing regularly'. 'To work laptops or a desktop' is incorrect structure. Use 'on a laptop or a desktop' to indicate the device used. Suggestion: Use 'practice' for skill improvement and adverbs like 'regularly' to indicate frequency.

× To improve my this skill, I try to type every day.

✓ To improve this skill, I try to type every day.

The phrase 'my this skill' has incorrect word order; use 'this skill' or 'my skill'. Present tense 'try to type every day' is fine. Suggestion: Place possessive determiners correctly ('my') before the noun or use demonstrative 'this' without 'my'.