Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the response more fluent and structured: start with a clear topic sentence, reduce hesitations, and provide one specific reason for each preference using linking words. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and use more accurate grammar (e.g., 'take notes fast' → 'take notes quickly').

例: I prefer typing for quick tasks and handwriting for personal writing. For example, I usually type during meetings because it’s faster and easier to organize notes, whereas I write my diary by hand because it feels more personal.

提案: Give a concise topic sentence and support it with a specific reason using linking words. Remove fillers and correct small grammar issues (e.g., 'bring it to everywhere' → 'take it everywhere').

例: I usually type on a laptop every day because I can easily take it with me. Also, since I work in communication marketing, a laptop helps me edit documents and manage campaigns on the go.

提案: Start with a clear, grammatical sentence stating when you learned and avoid unnecessary words. Provide one clear reason or brief detail and use linking words. Correct tense and article use (e.g., 'in 5th grade' and 'I felt grateful because it was taught at school').

例: I learned to type on a keyboard in the fifth grade because it was a required subject at school. I was grateful to learn early since it made computer tasks much easier later on.

提案: Use a clear topic sentence and give specific examples of how you practice, using linking words to explain benefit. Fix grammar (e.g., 'I practice' not 'I'm practice'). Aim for 2–3 sentences with specific methods.

例: I practice typing every day by doing online exercises and typing emails for study and work. As a result, my speed and accuracy have improved, which helps me finish tasks faster.

× If I need uh, take note fast or umm, you know, meeting, umm, it just uh, use my phone or laptop to type.

✓ If I need to take notes quickly, for example in a meeting, I usually use my phone or laptop to type.

Missing 'to' before the base verb and incorrect verb form: 'need to take' is required. 'Note' should be plural 'notes' after 'take'. Adverb placement: 'quickly' is the correct adverb form. Also clarity improvements: add 'for example' and 'usually' to sound natural.

× In contrast, when I write my diary, I just use a pen.

✓ In contrast, when I write in my diary, I just use a pen.

The verb 'write' typically takes the preposition 'in' when referring to writing in a diary. Omitting 'in' is incorrect usage of preposition.

× Every day I usually use umm, laptop to type because umm, I can bring it uh, and to everywhere.

✓ Every day I usually use a laptop to type because I can bring it everywhere.

Missing indefinite article 'a' before 'laptop'. 'And to everywhere' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'bring it everywhere' or 'take it everywhere'. Removed filler words for clarity.

× And uh, I work in communication marketing, so laptop can help me work.

✓ And I work in communications marketing, so the laptop helps me with my work.

Missing article 'the' before 'laptop' when referring back to a specific laptop. Also 'communication marketing' is better phrased 'communications marketing' or 'marketing communications'. Verb agreement: 'helps' agrees with singular 'laptop'. Added 'with my work' for natural collocation.

× I learned type UH by keyboard when I was uh, 5th grade Student is A because it's a subject in my school and I'm feel grateful because uh, I can learn.

✓ I learned to type on a keyboard when I was in fifth grade. Typing was a subject at my school, and I'm grateful I learned it early.

Several issues: use 'learned to type' (infinitive after 'learned'), 'on a keyboard' is correct preposition, 'in fifth grade' needs preposition 'in' and ordinal spelled out. 'Student is A' is unclear and removed; likely filler. 'It's a subject in my school' corrected to 'Typing was a subject at my school'. 'I'm feel' is incorrect; use 'I'm grateful' or 'I feel grateful'. Clarified 'learned it early'.

× I'm practice typing every day for my study and my work, uh, to enhance this skill.

✓ I practice typing every day for my studies and my work to improve this skill.

Incorrect present continuous 'I'm practice' should be simple present 'I practice' for habitual actions. 'Study' should be plural 'studies' in this context. 'Enhance' is acceptable but 'improve' is more natural here. Removed filler words.

× And I think it's a great way.

✓ And I think it's a great way to improve my skills.

Original sentence is grammatically acceptable but vague. Adding 'to improve my skills' clarifies the intended meaning. No core grammar error beyond incompleteness; adjusted for completeness and naturalness.