Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は意味が通じますが、流暢さが低く、繰り返しやためらいが多いです。トピック文を明確に述べ、その後に具体的な理由（例：速さ、記憶、筆記感覚）を1〜2文でつなげる練習をしてください。接続詞（because, so, therefore, also）を使って論理的に説明し、余分な「umm」や繰り返しを減らす練習をすると、より自然に聞こえます。語彙はシンプルで構いませんが、正しい前置詞や動詞表現（prefer writing to typing, I'm not good at using tech）を使うことを意識してください。

例: I prefer handwriting to typing because I find it more comfortable and it helps me remember information better. Also, writing by hand feels more personal and less distracting than using a computer.

提案: 答えは要点を伝えていますが文法や語順の誤りが目立ちます。まず短く明確な主文（Yes/Noや短い説明）を言い、その後理由を1文で加えてください。接続表現（because, so）と適切な語句（I don't have a laptop, I use a desktop）を用いると良いです。また“your computer”は面接で不自然なので“a/the computer”など正しい語を選ぶ練習をして下さい。

例: I usually type on a desktop because I don't own a laptop. I'm more comfortable using the desktop at home.

提案: 内容は適切ですが、言い直しやためらいが多く流暢性が下がっています。まず直接に「I learned to type in elementary school.」と述べ、その後で時期や状況（in my computer class, we practiced typing; I didn't have a computer at home）を具体的に1文で補足してください。時制と前置詞（learned to type on a keyboard / learned to type on a computerではなく learned to type）の使い分けに注意しましょう。

例: I learned to type in elementary school during our computer class. At that time we practiced basic typing skills at school because I didn't have a computer at home.

提案: 主旨は伝わりますが表現が不自然で語彙や文法の誤りが多いです。“petition”は誤用で“practice”や“repetition”を使うべきです。まず「I improve by practicing regularly.」と明確に述べ、その後で具体的な方法（online typing games, daily exercises, typing lessons）を1〜2文で説明してください。接続詞（for example, such as, by）を用いると論理的になります。

例: I improve my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I do daily typing exercises and use online typing games to increase my speed and accuracy.

× I prefer it writing rather than, umm, typing.

✓ I prefer handwriting rather than typing.

The phrase 'prefer writing' requires the gerund form for both options for parallel structure; 'it writing' is ungrammatical. Use 'handwriting' (noun) or 'writing by hand' to contrast with 'typing'. Improve by using parallel gerunds or nouns: 'I prefer handwriting to typing.'

× Umm, course I'm used.

✓ Of course, I'm used to it.

The student omitted necessary words and the preposition 'to' after 'used'. The correct structure is 'used to something' or 'used to doing something'. Add 'Of' and 'to it' to complete the sentence: 'Of course, I'm used to it.'

× I'm not good for umm, using, uh, tech, using laptops or computers.

✓ I'm not good at using technology, laptops, or computers.

The correct preposition after 'good' is 'at', not 'for'. Also 'tech' should be 'technology' and listing items needs commas. Use 'good at doing' + gerund: 'good at using technology.'

× I feel comfortable when I, umm, when I do handwriting.

✓ I feel comfortable when I write by hand.

The phrase 'do handwriting' is unnatural. Use 'write by hand' or 'handwrite'. Also remove duplicate 'when I'. Use appropriate verb phrase matching the context.

× It's very, you know, it makes me feel.

✓ It makes me feel comfortable.

The original is incomplete and contains a redundant pronoun 'it'. Provide a complete clause describing the feeling: 'It makes me feel comfortable.'

× When I use your computer I type on desktop cause my yeah I don't have a laptop computer.

✓ When I use a computer, I type on a desktop because I don't have a laptop.

Use article 'a' before 'computer' and 'desktop'. 'Cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. Remove redundant words 'my yeah' and 'computer' after 'laptop'. Ensure clear clause order.

× The I haven't I feel better and comfortable.

✓ I feel better and more comfortable using a desktop.

Sentence is ungrammatical and contains fragments. Combine ideas into one clear sentence stating preference and comfort. Use comparative 'more comfortable'.

× Well, maybe it was my, it was the class, umm, I learned how to type on computer for the first time, uh, in elementary school, uh, that time the computer I, I didn't have a computer on my own, so.

✓ Well, maybe it was in a class; I learned how to type on a computer for the first time in elementary school. At that time, I didn't have my own computer.

Use past tense consistently ('learned', 'didn't have') and correct article use ('on a computer'). Break into two sentences for clarity and remove repeated words. Use 'my own computer' for possession.

× Well, in my opinion, the petition it's the best way to improve the my computer skills.

✓ Well, in my opinion, practice is the best way to improve my computer skills.

'Petition' is wrong word; should be 'practice' or 'repetition'. Remove extra article 'the' before 'my' and use noun 'practice'.

× To be honest, I'm not a good order computer or things like technology, but to repeating type and practice and.

✓ To be honest, I'm not good with computers or technology, but by repeating typing and practicing, I can improve.

Original has wrong word 'order', wrong preposition 'a good with' and wrong verb forms. Use 'good with' + noun, and correct gerund phrases 'repeating typing' and 'practicing'. Complete the sentence to show result.