Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct and natural: remove redundant words and expand slightly with a brief reason. Use one clear topic sentence and up to two supporting details linked logically.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's faster and easier to edit. For example, I can quickly correct mistakes and use tools like spell check to improve my writing.

提案: Give a concise, structured response: start with a clear statement about frequency, then specify devices and add a short explanation using a linking word.

例: Not every day; I type occasionally. Mostly I use my laptop and sometimes my mobile phone because they are portable and convenient for quick messages.

提案: Provide a grammatically correct time reference and a short explanation of how you learned, using linking words for clarity.

例: I learned to type when I was about eleven. After I got my first laptop, I started practicing regularly by typing school assignments and using online typing exercises.

提案: This answer is unclear and not relevant. Give a direct method for improvement, explain why it helps, and use linking words to connect ideas. Mention specific practice techniques or tools.

例: I improve my typing by practicing daily with online typing tests and exercises. For instance, I use a typing website to track my speed and accuracy, and I focus on practicing difficult letter combinations to reduce errors.

× I like to prefer typing.

✓ I prefer typing.

The student used both 'like' and 'prefer' together which is redundant and awkward. 'Prefer' alone expresses the comparative liking. Use 'I prefer typing' for clarity and correct modal/verb usage.

× Yeah, sometimes, not every day. I just uh, like I type on laptop and mobile.

✓ Yeah, sometimes, not every day. I just, uh, type on my laptop and my mobile.

The sentence had missing articles and an unnecessary 'like'. Remove 'like' which is filler and add definite possessive 'my' before devices. Also adjust punctuation for natural speech. Using present simple 'type' is correct for habitual action.

× When I was 11 year old I bought my laptop and I start kind of learning on that.

✓ When I was 11 years old I bought my laptop and I started kind of learning on it.

Multiple tense and agreement errors: '11 year old' needs plural 'years' and 'was' requires 'old' remains; after past 'bought' the following action should be past 'started' (past tense issue). Also use object pronoun 'it' instead of 'that' for the laptop. 'Kind of' can remain as a hedge.

× I improve it by talking to my friends.

✓ I improve it by practicing typing with my friends.

'Improve it by talking to my friends' implies talking improves typing, which is unlikely and unclear. Use 'practicing typing' (verb + -ing) to show the method of improvement. 'Practicing with my friends' clarifies the activity and matches meaning.