Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more grammatical, concise and clear. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one specific reason and a short example. Avoid redundant phrases and incorrect grammar (e.g. "got" → "make a mistake"). Use linking words like "because" or "so" appropriately.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it's easier to correct mistakes. For example, when I write an email I can quickly delete or edit sentences, which saves time and makes my message clearer.

提案: Give a direct answer first (yes/no and which device), then support with a concise reason and one brief example. Correct grammar (e.g. "usually type on my mobile phone"), avoid repetition, and use linking words like "because" and "for example."

例: I don't type on a desktop every day; I usually type on my mobile phone because it's portable. For example, I often reply to messages on the subway using my phone since it's quick and convenient.

提案: Answer directly with a clear time reference, then give a concise supporting detail. Use correct tense and smoother phrasing (e.g. "I started learning to type in primary school during computer class"). Avoid awkward expressions like "click in the button."

例: I started learning to type in primary school during our computer classes. At that time we practised basic keys and simple exercises, which helped me become comfortable with the keyboard.

提案: Provide a clear method: state one or two specific strategies for improvement and give a short example. Avoid fillers ("umm") and vague phrases ("your strained"). Use linking words like "first" or "for example."

例: I improve my typing by regular practice and using online typing exercises. For example, I spend 15 minutes a day on a typing website to increase speed and accuracy, and I check my progress weekly to set new goals.

× Personally, I'm more comfortable with typing because when you got something wrong it can be added easily, so it would be more convenient than you want to express some thing in yourself for someone to understand you.

✓ Personally, I'm more comfortable with typing because when you get something wrong it can be corrected easily, so it is more convenient when you want to express something about yourself for someone to understand you.

Multiple issues: 'got' is incorrect tense/form and should be present simple 'get' for general situations (Grammar problem type ID 6: Present tense issue). 'Added' is wrong verb choice; 'corrected' fits meaning (Grammar problem type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). 'than you want to express some thing in yourself for someone to understand you' is ungrammatical and unclear; rephrased to 'when you want to express something about yourself for someone to understand you' to correct preposition use and sentence structure (Grammar problem type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions; ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestions: use present simple for general truths, choose verbs that match intended meaning, and simplify the clause to 'when you want to express something about yourself'.

× Not really everyday but usually because I am a fan of mobile phone so I would usually typing in my mobile phone because is it easy to carry and more convenient.

✓ Not really every day, but usually I type on my mobile phone because it is easy to carry and more convenient.

Errors: 'everyday' used as adjective but needed adverb phrase 'every day' (Grammar problem type ID 22: Article errors/word form; treated as word form issue). 'would usually typing' mixes modal 'would' with present participle incorrectly; use simple present 'I type' for habitual action (Grammar problem type ID 6: Present tense issue and ID 8: Verb + -ing form). 'because is it easy' has incorrect word order; correct is 'because it is easy' (Grammar problem type ID 26: Sentence structure errors and ID 11: Incorrect use of pronouns/word order). Suggestion: use simple present for habits, separate 'every day', and keep subject-verb order 'it is'.

× Just pick your phone from your pocket and typing and it's not that huge so you can take it everywhere.

✓ Just pick your phone from your pocket and type; it's not that big so you can take it everywhere.

'typing' is wrong form after conjunction 'and' where base verb 'type' is needed (Grammar problem type ID 8: Verb + -ing form). 'not that huge' is natural but 'not that big' is more idiomatic here (Grammar problem type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs). Also punctuation and clause connection improved (Grammar problem type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: use parallel verb forms after 'and' and choose appropriate adjective for size expressions.

× Back to the time when I was studying in primary school, it was the first time when I knew laptop and I started to type when I have computer classes.

✓ Back when I was in primary school, it was the first time I knew about laptops and I started to type when I had computer classes.

Tense and word choice issues: 'have' is present while referring to past events; use past 'had' (Grammar problem type ID 5: Past tense issue). 'knew laptop' is incorrect collocation; use 'knew about laptops' or 'was introduced to laptops' (Grammar problem type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word choice). 'Back to the time when' is awkward; 'Back when' is natural (Grammar problem type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: keep past tense consistent for past events and use correct collocations like 'know about' or 'be introduced to'.

× So that was the first time I learned how to just click in the button on the keyboard.

✓ So that was the first time I learned how to just press the button on the keyboard.

'click in the button' is incorrect verb-preposition combination; 'press the button' or 'press a key' is correct (Grammar problem type ID 11: Incorrect use of prepositions and ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word choice). Suggestion: use 'press a key' or 'press the button' when talking about keyboards.

× Practice make perfect.

✓ Practice makes perfect.

Subject-verb agreement error: the noun 'practice' (third-person singular) requires the verb 'makes' (Grammar problem type ID 27: Subject-verb agreement errors). Suggestion: memorize common fixed expressions and ensure correct verb agreement.

× Umm, When you usually practice doing something for a really long time, it will be your routine and it will be your kind of umm, your strained.

✓ When you usually practice doing something for a long time, it will become your routine and part of your skill set.

Tense and word choice: 'will be your routine' is acceptable but 'become your routine' is more natural for gradual change (Grammar problem type ID 6: Present tense/usage issue). 'your strained' is incorrect and unclear; likely meant 'strength' or 'skill' (Grammar problem type ID 13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs/word choice). Suggestion: use 'become' for gradual changes and choose appropriate nouns like 'skill' or 'strength'.

× So umm you can improve it as well as when you do it.

✓ So you can improve it as well by practicing regularly.

Sentence structure and redundancy: 'as well as when you do it' is awkward and unclear; rephrase to 'by practicing regularly' to express method (Grammar problem type ID 26: Sentence structure errors). Suggestion: use clear prepositional phrases ('by' + gerund) to explain how improvement occurs and avoid filler words.