Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the answer more concise and structured: start with a clear topic sentence stating preference, then give two specific reasons with linking words, and finish with a short mention of exceptions. Avoid vague phrasing and repetition.

例: I prefer handwriting to typing because writing on paper helps me remember information better — the physical feel and spatial arrangement on the page make it easier to recall. However, I sometimes type when I need speed or to share notes electronically.

提案: Provide a direct topic sentence naming which device you use, then add specific details and a linking word to explain why. Correct grammar (tenses and articles) and avoid awkward expressions.

例: Yes, I type on a laptop every day at work. Because I work in an office, I regularly use my laptop to write emails and prepare documents, so typing is part of my daily routine.

提案: Start with a clear time reference, then give concise supporting detail about who taught you and why. Use correct tense and simpler phrasing for clarity, and avoid filler words like 'maybe'.

例: I learned to type when I was about seven years old. My parents gave me a laptop and taught me basic typing because they believed it would be useful for my education and future work.

提案: Give a clear method or habits you use to improve typing with specific examples and linking words. Use correct grammar and complete sentences. Avoid vague, fragmented endings.

例: I improve my typing by practising regularly on my laptop — I type assignments and notes daily, and I also use online typing exercises to increase speed and accuracy. As a result, my typing gradually gets better.

× I prefer handwriting on paper because I think it will strengthen our memory, the texture and the position of our writing and paper can make its own memory to our brain.

✓ I prefer handwriting on paper because I think it strengthens our memory; the texture and position of the paper and our writing can create their own memory traces in the brain.

Errors: incorrect prepositions and word order ('on paper' is fine but 'make its own memory to our brain' is awkward and uses wrong preposition). Also verb tense/subject agreement: 'will strengthen' is unnecessarily future; use simple present 'strengthens' for general fact. Suggestion: use 'create memory traces in the brain' and place modifiers ('paper and our writing') in clear order. Use semicolon or connector to join related ideas. Grammar problem type ID:11

× But sometimes I use typing too.

✓ But sometimes I type too.

Error: incorrect verb form 'use typing' should be simple verb 'type' for the action. 'Use typing' is unnatural and mixes 'use' with an -ing noun incorrectly. Suggestion: replace with 'type' or 'use a keyboard' depending on context. Grammar problem type ID:10

× Yes I do because I work in office and I was facilitated by computer so how every day I use computer to write e-mail or document on my work.

✓ Yes, I do because I work in an office and I am supported by a computer, so every day I use a computer to write e-mails and documents for my work.

Multiple errors: missing articles ('an office', 'a computer'), incorrect passive 'was facilitated by computer' (use 'am supported' or 'use a computer'), adverb placement ('so every day'), pluralization 'e-mail or document' should be 'e-mails and documents'. Subject-verb tense: use present simple for routines. Suggestion: use natural collocations: 'work in an office', 'use a computer', 'write e-mails and documents'. Grammar problem type ID:2

× I studied it when I was very young, like maybe 7 years old.

✓ I learned it when I was very young, maybe when I was seven years old.

'Studied it' is grammatically possible but 'learned it' is more natural for acquiring a skill. Also include 'when I was' before the age for clarity. Use words for numbers under ten in formal speech: 'seven'. Tense is past simple and fits the question about when. Grammar problem type ID:5

× My parents give me laptop and they teach me about how to type in the laptop because they know it will be useful in the future.

✓ My parents gave me a laptop and taught me how to type on it because they knew it would be useful in the future.

Errors: tense inconsistency (present 'give' and 'teach' should be past 'gave' and 'taught' to match 'when I was young'), missing article 'a laptop', incorrect preposition 'type in the laptop' should be 'type on it', and pronoun 'it' needed to refer to laptop. Suggestion: keep past tense for past events and use correct prepositions and articles. Grammar problem type ID:12

× The more I grow up the more I use laptop especially for study and by that I always improve my skills on typing day by day and actually I love to writings too so I always almost.

✓ The more I grew up, the more I used my laptop, especially for studying, and that helped me improve my typing skills day by day. I also actually love writing, so I almost always practice.

Many issues: tense consistency (use past when referring to growing up or switch entire sentence to present generalization), missing article 'my laptop', incorrect verb forms ('for study' -> 'for studying'; 'improve my skills on typing' -> 'improve my typing skills'), incorrect noun pluralization 'writings' -> 'writing', and awkward word order 'I always almost' -> 'I almost always'. Suggestion: choose consistent tense, use gerunds for activities ('studying', 'writing'), and correct adverb placement ('almost always'). Grammar problem type ID:6