Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答は直接的で分かりやすいですが、言い直しやためらい語（umm, well）を減らし、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いです。また、文を整理して冗長さを避け、Linking word（because, so, therefore）を正しく使って論理的にまとめてください。例えば「In exams I prefer typing because it’s faster and I can edit easily.」のように。

例: I prefer typing in exams because it’s faster and I can easily edit and copy-paste text when needed.

提案: 回答は毎日使うことを伝えていますが、文法や語順の誤り（"because to do" や動詞時制の不一致）があります。Supporting detailsは具体的で良いので、linking wordsでつなぎ、正しい時制・語順を使って簡潔にまとめてください。例えば「I use my laptop every day for homework and gaming. Recently I used it to research for a report.」のように。

例: I use my laptop every day for homework and gaming. Recently, I used it to research studies and write a report.

提案: 意味が不明瞭な表現（"detaching a topic" や構文の混乱）があり、内容が具体的でないため減点です。質問は「いつ習ったか」なので、まず時期を明確に述べ、その後でどのように練習したかを具体例で補足してください。接続詞を使って文を分け、自然な表現に直しましょう。

例: I learned to type when I was at school, around age 10. Later, I practised online with typing websites and language tools like ChatGPT, which also helped my English.

提案: 率直さは良いですが、ためらい語が多く、表現が不自然です（"I like this to type every 10 minutes"）。改善方法の詳細（頻度・方法・具体的なサイト名や練習内容）を明確にし、linking wordsで構造化してください。例えば「I practise daily on a typing website for 15 minutes using games to improve accuracy and speed.」のように。

例: I practise typing every day on a typing website for about 15 minutes. I use typing games to improve my speed and accuracy.

× Recently I research some studies and I make a report.

✓ Recently I researched some studies and made a report.

The verbs 'research' and 'make' should be in the past tense (past simple) to match 'Recently'. Use 'researched' and 'made' as past forms. Suggestion: mark completed actions with past simple (I researched ... and made ...).

× Yes, I use it every day. I use it because to do my homework or to play games.

✓ Yes, I use it every day. I use it to do my homework or to play games.

The phrase 'because to do' is incorrect English. Use 'to' after 'use it' to express purpose: 'I use it to do ...'. 'Because' would require a clause ('because I do my homework on it'). Suggestion: choose 'to + verb' for purpose or 'because + clause' for reason.

× When I learned I used keyboard by detaching a topic or using Internet such as ChatGPT, it makes help my English skills.

✓ When I learned, I used the keyboard by looking up topics or using the Internet such as ChatGPT; it helped my English skills.

Several tense and word choice issues: 'When I learned' is acceptable but needs a comma; 'used keyboard' requires an article 'the keyboard'; 'detaching a topic' is incorrect—use 'looking up topics'; 'using Internet' needs 'the Internet'; 'it makes help my English skills' is ungrammatical — use past 'it helped my English skills' to match past context. Suggestion: use correct articles and past tense verbs and common collocations ('look up topics', 'the Internet', 'helped').

× But during the exam I like to type because it is easy for me and also umm well also I can copy and paste so I like that.

✓ But during the exam I like to type because it is easy for me and I can copy and paste, so I like that.

Redundant 'also umm well also' is disfluent; remove filler words. The structure 'because ... and ... so' should be punctuated with commas. Verb forms are fine; this is mostly style and cohesion. Suggestion: avoid filler words and combine clauses clearly with commas.

× When I learned I used keyboard by detaching a topic or using Internet such as ChatGPT, it makes help my English skills.

✓ When I learned, I used the keyboard by looking up topics or using the Internet such as ChatGPT; it helped my English skills.

This repeats previous correction but focuses on article use: 'used keyboard' needs 'the keyboard'; 'using Internet' needs 'the Internet'. Suggestion: include 'the' with 'keyboard' and 'Internet' in these contexts.

× This site helps me to play a game and practice type.

✓ This site helps me play games and practice typing.

Use 'play games' (plural) or 'play a game' and use the gerund 'typing' after 'practice'. 'Practice' is followed by a gerund in English. Suggestion: use 'practice typing' and prefer 'play games' for general activities.

× When I learned I used keyboard by detaching a topic or using Internet such as ChatGPT, it makes help my English skills.

✓ When I learned, I used the keyboard by looking up topics or using the Internet such as ChatGPT; it helped my English skills.

The clause 'it makes help my English skills' incorrectly uses 'makes' with 'help'. For third person singular in present you would use 'makes', but here the meaning requires 'helped' (past). Ensure subject-verb form matches tense and meaning. Suggestion: align verb form with intended tense: 'it helped' for past.

× Uh, well, I'm not good at typing. However I like this to type umm every 10 minutes by using the Internet site.

✓ Uh, well, I'm not good at typing. However, I like to practice typing every 10 minutes using a website.

Original sentence has awkward structure: 'I like this to type' is incorrect; 'every 10 minutes by using the Internet site' is clumsy. Use 'I like to practice typing every 10 minutes using a website.' Suggestion: place infinitive 'to practice' after 'like' and use 'using a website' or 'on a website' for clarity.

× However I like this to type umm every 10 minutes by using the Internet site.

✓ However, I like to practice typing every 10 minutes on a website.

Use 'on a website' rather than 'by using the Internet site' for natural preposition. Also 'this to type' is incorrect. Suggestion: use 'on' with 'website' and 'practice typing' as the verb phrase.