Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 在回答中要更自然、简洁并且正面陈述观点，同时用一到两句具体原因或例子来支持。注意连词和短语的正确用法（例如用 "on the other hand" 表示对比，但这里不需要对比，可用 because 或 since），并避免语法和拼写错误（例如 "efficient" 应为形容词，搭配应为 "more efficient"；"tabs" 用词不当，应为 "typing" 或 "devices"）。建议将答案控制在3-4句内。

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because my handwriting is hard to read and typing is faster. For example, I can quickly edit and share documents on my laptop or phone. This helps me finish study and work tasks more efficiently.

提案: 回答要直接，不需要开头的疑问句。先给出明确回答，然后简短说明原因或频率，并注意时态和语法（例如 "since I was a student" 应用完成时或明确时间点；避免句子残缺，如最后一句应完整）。控制在2-4句内。

例: I mostly type on my laptop because I started using it at university and it's portable. However, I use a desktop at work for long tasks because it has a larger screen and a better keyboard.

提案: 回答中要用正确的时间表达（例如使用年龄时说 "when I was thirteen"），并用一两句连贯描述学习经历的具体情景或方法，避免含糊表达。注意语法，如 "the first time" 的位置和句子完整性。

例: I learned to type when I was thirteen after I got my first computer. At first I practised by playing games and chatting online, which helped me improve my speed gradually.

提案: 回答需更清晰地说明是否有意识练习以及具体改进方法。避免拼写和语法错误（如 "Titan" 应为 "typing"；"I've chat" 应为 "I used to chat" 或 "I have chatted"）。提供具体练习手段（如练习软件、盲打练习、定时练习）并控制句子数量。

例: I haven't practiced typing systematically, but chatting online in high school helped me improve my speed. Recently, I start using typing tutors and practise 15 minutes a day to improve accuracy and speed.

× I prefer typing much more than handwriting since my handwriting is too ugly to recognize.

✓ I prefer typing to handwriting since my handwriting is too ugly to read.

句中比较结构应使用 prefer A to B（偏好A而非B），不能用 much more than 结构。另 “recognize” 用于识别人或物，描述字迹难以辨认应使用 “read”。建议记住固定搭配 prefer A to B，并区分动词语义：read 用于文字，recognize 用于识别。

× In the other hand, tabs on computer or cell phone is much efficient and recognized.

✓ On the other hand, tabs on computers or cell phones are much more efficient and recognizable.

应使用固定短语 on the other hand（另一方面），不是 In the other hand。名词复数 computer/cell phone 在泛指时用复数。主语是复数，动词应为 are（主谓一致）。形容词 efficient 比较级需用 more efficient；recognized 含义不对，应使用 recognizable（可被识别/辨认）。建议注意固定短语和主谓一致以及形容词比较级形式。

× Is it? I type on my laptop all the time since I was a student.

✓ Do I? I have typed on my laptop all the time since I was a student.

原句 Do I? 比较口语化且语境应为回答“Do you type...?”的肯定陈述，直接回答用现在完成时表从过去持续到现在：have typed ... since ...。原句用一般现在时不匹配“since I was a student”表示从过去某时起持续到现在，应用现在完成时。建议区分时间状语 since 引导的从过去持续到现在应使用现在完成时。

× I can type on a desktop. When I work, I use the desktop to.

✓ I can type on a desktop. When I work, I use the desktop too.

句末的 to 是拼写错误，应为 too（也）。同时前一句 desktop 泛指可用 a desktop，后句若指同一台电脑可用 the desktop。建议注意 too 与 to 的区别以及冠词 a/the 的用法。

× If I remembered rightly, it was my thirteen years old.

✓ If I remember correctly, I was thirteen years old.

条件状语常用现在时 remember 与 if 引导的假设表达用 If I remember correctly（如果我记得没错）。原句 remembered（过去式）与时间不匹配。且表达年龄用 I was thirteen years old（我是十三岁），不能说 it was my thirteen years old。建议使用固定表达 If I remember correctly 和 age 的正确表述。

× I had my own computer the first time and then I learned how to type.

✓ I got my first computer then and learned how to type.

原句 the first time 位置和用法不自然，建议使用 get 或 have 的过去时态表示“第一次拥有电脑”：I got my first computer then。并可省略 then 或放在句首以保持句子自然流畅。建议注意时间状语的位置和更地道的表达。

× But mostly I use it as a playground.

✓ But mostly I used it as a playground.

上下文在讲过去（had/get computer and learned then），所以应保持过去时 used。原句用一般现在时与上下文时态不一致。playground 用法可接受，表示主要把电脑当作娱乐工具。建议注意时态一致。

× I haven't improved my Titan consciously because when I was a high school student, it's very popular to chat with strangers online.

✓ I haven't improved my typing consciously because when I was a high school student, it was very popular to chat with strangers online.

原句 Titan 应为 typing（拼写错误）。时态混用：I haven't improved ...（现在完成时）之后的时间状语“when I was a high school student”应与过去时连用，但可以说明从过去到现在未有改进，用现在完成时是可以的，但后半句应使用过去时 was 而不是 it's（it is）。同时 typing 拼写正确。建议注意单词拼写和时态一致性（过去背景用过去时）。

× I'm crazy in it. I've chat all the time, so.

✓ I was crazy about it. I chatted all the time.

英语中常用 be crazy about sth 表示“非常喜欢”，而不是 crazy in。已发生的行为用过去时 chatted。I've chat 混合现在完成和动词原形，错误，应为 I chatted 或 I've chatted，语境更适合过去时。最后的 so 不完整，应省略。建议记住固定搭配 crazy about 和动词时态/形式的一致性。