Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise, correct grammar, and use clearer linking. Start with a direct topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with correct tense and plural/singular agreement. Avoid redundancy and long run-on sentences.

例: I prefer typing to handwriting because it is faster and more convenient. For example, I can send messages or long notes to friends quickly, and cloud apps let me access my writing on any device.

提案: Answer directly and improve grammar and phrasing. Use one clear sentence stating the usual habit, then add a brief supporting reason with a linking word (because/so).

例: No, I usually type on my mobile phone rather than a desktop or laptop because I find my phone more convenient for messaging and quick tasks.

提案: Begin with a direct time reference and simplify the supporting detail. Fix articles and plural forms, and use a linking phrase to connect cause and result.

例: I learned to type when I was in primary school. Our IT teacher showed us how to use the desktop keyboard, and that is where I first practiced touch-typing.

提案: Focus on present habits for improvement and use clear, chronological linking words. Mention specific actions you took to improve (practice, online courses, exercises) and maintain correct tense and subject-verb agreement.

例: I improved my typing by practicing regularly. For example, I did timed typing exercises and used online lessons; over time my speed and accuracy increased, and now I can type quickly on my phone.

× I prefer typing because the technology is being so advanced nowadays so everyone prefer to type rather than writing as we can text to our friends and it is more convenient and easy to just get those messages reached them by the time and it in just few clicks we are able to tell the whole story.

✓ I prefer typing because technology is very advanced nowadays, so everyone prefers to type rather than write. We can text our friends, and it is more convenient and easy to get messages to them on time; in just a few clicks we can tell the whole story.

Multiple adverb/adjective and word-choice errors: 'the technology is being so advanced' is awkward — use 'technology is very advanced' (adjective with appropriate adverb). 'everyone prefer' is a subject-verb agreement error corrected below but also linked to verb form (see ID 27); keep present simple 'prefers'. 'rather than writing' should be parallel with 'type' so use 'rather than write'. 'text to our friends' is incorrect preposition usage — use 'text our friends'. 'get those messages reached them by the time' is ungrammatical; use 'get messages to them on time'. 'it in just few clicks' needs article and word order: 'in just a few clicks'. Suggestions: use simple present tense and parallel verb forms, remove unnecessary articles, and reorder phrases for clarity.

× I usually don't type on a desktop or a laptop on the daily basis because as we are more fond of using mobile phones so I prefer typing on my mobile phones.

✓ I usually don't type on a desktop or laptop on a daily basis because we prefer using mobile phones, so I prefer typing on my mobile phone.

Subject-verb agreement and word choice: 'on the daily basis' should be 'on a daily basis'. 'as we are more fond of using mobile phones so' is redundant and awkward; simplify to 'because we prefer using mobile phones'. 'my mobile phones' is plural but refers to one device — use 'my mobile phone'. Also remove unnecessary articles: 'a desktop or laptop' or simply 'a desktop or laptop'. Maintain consistency in number and simplify conjunctions.

× When I was in my primary school there we had a computer classes and our IT teacher taught us about how to type on the desktop and from that I learned typing on the keyboards.

✓ When I was in primary school, we had computer classes and our IT teacher taught us how to type on a desktop, and from that I learned to type on the keyboard.

Tense and article errors: 'my primary school there we had a computer classes' has unnecessary 'there' and incorrect articles — use 'in primary school, we had computer classes'. 'taught us about how to type' is awkward; use 'taught us how to type'. 'on the desktop' should be 'on a desktop' (indefinite article) or simply 'on the desktop' if referring to a specific machine; here 'a desktop' is better. 'learned typing on the keyboards' is incorrect; use 'learned to type on the keyboard' or 'learned to type on keyboards'. Use past simple consistently for completed past actions.

× When I was a child my speed of typing was a bit slow, but as the flow of time by typing in the a lot of sessions my speed gradually increases and now as I use mobile phone my speed is all good to get the proper messages or text.

✓ When I was a child, my typing speed was a bit slow, but over time, by practicing in many sessions, my speed gradually increased, and now that I use a mobile phone my speed is good enough to send proper messages or texts.

Present vs past tense and adverb placement: the sentence mixes past and present incorrectly. Use past simple 'my typing speed was' and 'my speed gradually increased' for past improvements. 'as the flow of time' is unnatural; use 'over time'. 'by typing in the a lot of sessions' should be 'by practicing in many sessions'. 'my speed is all good to get the proper messages or text' is ungrammatical — use 'my speed is good enough to send proper messages or texts'. Ensure tense consistency and clearer adverb placement.