Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cümleyi daha doğal ve doğru İngilizce ile kurmalısınız. Konuya doğrudan yanıt verin, sonra kısa destekleyici nedenler ekleyin. Kelime hatalarını düzeltin (ör. "would like to handwriting" yerine "prefer handwriting"). Bağlaçlarla daha akıcı hale getirin ve 3-4 cümleyi geçmeyin.

例: I prefer typing when I'm texting because it's faster and more convenient, but I prefer handwriting when I'm studying because writing by hand helps me remember information better.

提案: Cümleleri sadeleştirip tekrarları kaldırmalısınız. Doğru article kullanımına ve zaman uyumuna dikkat edin ("a desktop computer", "I used to have a laptop"). Bir bağlaç kullanarak nedeninizi kısa açıklayın.

例: I type on a desktop because I have a desktop computer at home. I used to have a laptop, so I typed on that before, but now I mainly use my desktop for work and study.

提案: Zaman ifadelerini ve fiil çekimlerini düzeltin (ör. "I was a kid" → "when I was a kid", "he taught me"). Cümleleri mantıklı sırayla bağlayın ve gereksiz sözcükleri çıkarın. Duygu ifadesini kısa tutun ve bir örnek ekleyin.

例: I learned to type when I was a kid. My brother had an old computer and he taught me how to use the keyboard, which I remember fondly because we often practiced together after school.

提案: Genel ifadeler yerine daha spesifik yöntemler verin ve dilbilgisi hatalarını düzeltin ("everyone has", "it taught me"). Kısa, mantıklı nedenler ve örnekler kullanın; örn. pratik uygulamalar, eğitim siteleri veya düzenli alıştırma.

例: I improved my typing mainly through daily use of computers and phones, but I also practiced with online typing lessons and regular exercises, which helped increase my speed and accuracy.

× I like typing if I am texting but if I am studying I would like to handwriting.

✓ I like typing when I am texting, but when I am studying I would like to handwrite.

The verb 'handwrite' is needed instead of the noun 'handwriting' after 'would like to'. Use 'when' for time clauses and keep consistent verb forms. Suggestion: use 'handwrite' (base verb) after 'would like to' and match parallel structure: 'when I am texting' vs 'when I am studying'.

× I type on desktop because I have desktop computer.

✓ I type on a desktop because I have a desktop computer.

The noun 'desktop' requires an article. Use 'a desktop' and 'a desktop computer' to indicate one unspecified item. Suggestion: include appropriate indefinite articles before singular countable nouns.

× I used to have laptop when I when I had laptop I used keyboard everyday, but right now I don't have it anymore.

✓ I used to have a laptop; when I had it I used a keyboard every day, but right now I don't have one anymore.

Missing articles and repeated words create a run-on sentence. Include 'a' before 'laptop' and 'keyboard', use 'every day' as two words for frequency, and replace repeated 'when I' with a clause separated by punctuation. Use 'one' or 'it' to refer back clearly. Suggestion: break into clearer clauses and add articles.

× I have a brother and he had an old computer.

✓ I had a brother and he had an old computer.

Context suggests speaker refers to childhood; if they still have the brother, keep 'have'. If describing past situation, keep past consistently: 'I had a brother' implies past. However original likely meant 'I had a brother who had an old computer' or 'I have a brother who had an old computer'. To correct grammar while keeping intended meaning: use 'I have a brother and he had an old computer' should be 'I have a brother who had an old computer.' Suggestion: use relative clause 'who' to connect present possession with a past detail.

× He teach me how to type on key on my keyboard and it was a cute memory.

✓ He taught me how to type on the keys of my keyboard, and it was a cute memory.

Verb tense is wrong and articles/prepositions incorrect. Use past tense 'taught'. 'Type on key on my keyboard' should be 'type on the keys of my keyboard' or 'type on my keyboard'. Add comma before the conjunction. Suggestion: use correct past tense and add definite article and plural 'keys'.

× In this century everyone have computer, iPad or mobile phone, so it's not that hard.

✓ In this century, everyone has a computer, iPad, or mobile phone, so it's not that hard.

Subject 'everyone' is singular and requires 'has' not 'have'. Also add articles before singular countable nouns and capitalize 'I'. Suggestion: use 'everyone has' and 'a computer' and proper capitalization.

× I improve my typing because I had to.

✓ I improved my typing because I had to.

The clause indicates a past reason, so the past tense 'improved' should be used to match 'had to'. Suggestion: keep past tense consistent for actions completed in the past.

× I have to use computer every day, so it's taught me.

✓ I have to use a computer every day, so it taught me.

Missing article before 'computer' and wrong verb form 'it's taught me' (present perfect contracted) is incorrect here. Use simple past 'taught me' to show the consequence. Suggestion: add 'a' and use correct past tense 'taught'.