Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and natural: start with a clear topic sentence, then give one or two specific reasons with brief supporting detail. Avoid repetition and correct small grammar issues (e.g., "I enjoy writing," "it's helped me"). Use a linking word to connect reason and example.

例: I prefer handwriting because I enjoy writing by hand. For example, I keep a diary where I record my thoughts every day, and writing by hand helps me remember feelings better than typing.

提案: Provide a direct topic sentence then a concise supporting detail. Avoid repeating phrases. Improve naturalness by using one clear reason and an example of typical tasks. Use a linking word like "because" or "so" correctly.

例: I usually type on a desktop because that's the computer we use at my office. For instance, I prepare reports and emails on my office desktop every day, so I am comfortable with that keyboard.

提案: Give a clear past-time statement followed by one or two specific details. Fix grammar ("my teacher taught me," "at school," "I became fluent after practice"). Use linking words like "then" or "after" to show sequence.

例: I learned to type when I was at school. My teacher taught us the basics, and after practicing regularly I became quite fluent.

提案: Answer with a clear present-tense topic sentence about current practice habits. Mention specific methods and frequency, and use correct grammar ("I have regular practice sessions," "my tutor teaches me"). Use linking words like "by" or "through" to connect methods and results.

例: I improve my typing by practicing every day with a tutor. For example, I do timed typing exercises and complete short lessons each day, which has made my speed and accuracy much better.

× I always prefer handwriting because I enjoy to write something.

✓ I always prefer handwriting because I enjoy writing.

The verb 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund (-ing form), not the infinitive 'to write'. Use 'writing' after 'enjoy'. Suggestion: replace 'to write something' with 'writing' or 'writing things'. Use gerund after verbs of preference like 'enjoy'.

× I usually write my thoughts in my diary and it's it's helped me a lot.

✓ I usually write my thoughts in my diary and it has helped me a lot.

The repeated 'it's it's' is a typo and should be a single 'it has' (contraction 'it's' can mean 'it has' but duplication is wrong). Use 'it has helped' for present perfect to show effect up to now. Suggestion: use 'it has helped me a lot' or 'it's helped me a lot' (single contraction).

× So that's why I prefer handwriting instead of typing.

✓ So that's why I prefer handwriting to typing.

When comparing preferences, use 'prefer A to B', not 'prefer A instead of B'. Suggestion: say 'prefer handwriting to typing'.

× I am a supervisor in a company, so I usually type on a desktop.

✓ I am a supervisor at a company, so I usually type on a desktop.

Use the preposition 'at' with 'a company' to indicate workplace. The rest is fine; tense 'usually type' correctly uses simple present for habitual action. Suggestion: use 'at a company' rather than 'in a company'.

× I usually work on that desktop, so I am good to type.

✓ I usually work on that desktop, so I am good at typing.

After 'good' use the preposition 'at' plus gerund for ability (good at typing). 'Good to type' is incorrect. Suggestion: say 'good at typing' or 'comfortable typing'.

× When I was in my school my teacher learned me how to type in on a keyboard and she was too good and on the time I type first time on a keyboard and after that few times I fluent to type on a keyboard.

✓ When I was at school, my teacher taught me how to type on a keyboard. She was very good, and the first time I typed on a keyboard I became more fluent after practicing a few times.

Multiple errors: use 'at school' not 'in my school'; 'teach' in past is 'taught' and the object is 'taught me'; remove extra 'in' before 'on a keyboard'; 'too good' is incorrect register—use 'very good'; 'on the time' should be 'the first time' or 'at that time'; past action uses past tense 'typed'; 'after that few times I fluent' should be 'after practicing a few times I became more fluent'. Suggestion: split into clearer sentences, use past simple ('taught', 'typed', 'became') and 'practice' as noun/verb correctly.

× I had regular practice session with my tutor who teach me to how to type on a keyboard and always try to practice and few lessons with my teacher so it quite fluent and I practiced every day so I improve my typing.

✓ I had regular practice sessions with my tutor who taught me how to type on a keyboard. I always tried to practice and took a few lessons with my teacher, so I became quite fluent. I practiced every day, so I improved my typing.

Multiple issues: plural 'practice sessions' needed; 'teach' should be past 'taught'; remove extra 'to' ('taught me how to'); maintain past tense consistency ('always tried', 'took lessons', 'became', 'practiced', 'improved') since describing past learning. Also 'quite fluent' needs verb 'became'. Suggestion: use past simple throughout when describing past learning, correct verb forms and plural nouns.