Typing— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be more concise and fluent: state your preference clearly, give one or two specific reasons, avoid fillers (uh) and redundancy (familiarity/familiarize). Use linking words to connect ideas (because, however, although).

例: I prefer typing because it’s faster and easier to correct mistakes. However, I still write by hand sometimes because it helps me remember information better.

提案: Answer directly and organize details: begin with a clear topic sentence (e.g., I mainly use my phone), then add a short explanation and a contrasting point (use a laptop for longer tasks). Correct small grammar (‘in the field’ not ‘on in the field basis’) and avoid repetition.

例: I mainly use my phone for daily communication because I work in the field. For longer documents or emails I use a laptop, as it’s more comfortable for typing.

提案: Be specific about timing and activities: give a clear time frame and concise reasons or examples of practice. Avoid vague phrasing like ‘spending essays’ — use correct verbs (write, submit). Keep to two or three sentences max.

例: I learned to type in primary school and became quite confident by middle school. I practised by typing and submitting essays, doing homework, and chatting with classmates.

提案: Give a little more detail and use linking words: mention specific methods, frequency and any measurable improvement. Replace repetitive phrases and avoid unnecessary repetition of 'typing'.

例: I improve my typing by texting friends every day and practising on online typing games several times a week. This has helped me increase my speed and reduce errors.

× I prefer typing because it is more convenient and reliable, most especially when you have mistakes.

✓ I prefer typing because it is more convenient and reliable, especially when you make mistakes.

The original uses 'you have mistakes' which incorrectly addresses general situation and uses 'have' with 'mistakes'. Using 'you make mistakes' is idiomatic for errors made while typing. Also 'most especially' is redundant; 'especially' is clearer.

× You can easily erase it though.

✓ You can easily erase it, though.

Add a comma before the concessive 'though' for natural punctuation. The pronoun 'it' is acceptable if referring to typed text; no other grammatical change needed.

× Handwriting improves my, uh, familiarity, and it helps me to, uh, familiarize the things that I'm doing.

✓ Handwriting improves my familiarity and helps me become more familiar with the things I am doing.

The original uses awkward phrasing 'familiarize the things' and unnecessary filler 'to, uh, familiarize'. Use 'become more familiar with' and correct preposition 'with'. Remove extra commas.

× No I am usually using my phone for communication and texting because I work on in the field basis.

✓ No. I usually use my phone for communication and texting because I work in the field.

Use simple present 'usually use' instead of present continuous 'am usually using' for habitual actions. 'Work on in the field basis' is ungrammatical; correct phrase is 'work in the field'.

× Though I I use laptop for typing long documents and sending emails to my Co workers.

✓ I do use a laptop for typing long documents and sending emails to my co-workers.

Insert article 'a' before 'laptop' and fix doubled 'I'. 'Co workers' should be hyphenated 'co-workers' or 'coworkers' and lowercased. Add auxiliary 'do' for emphasis if keeping 'Though' removed; here corrected to a clear sentence.

× I first learned it in my primary school days, and I was able to master it in my middle school for spending essays and homework to my teachers and also using it for communication with my friends and classmates.

✓ I first learned it in primary school, and I was able to master it in middle school by writing essays and homework for my teachers and by using it to communicate with my friends and classmates.

Simplify 'primary school days' to 'primary school'. Use 'in middle school' not 'my middle school' for general schooling. 'For spending essays and homework to my teachers' is incorrect: use 'by writing essays and homework for my teachers'. Use parallel gerunds and correct prepositions.

× I improve my typing through communicating with my friends on a daily basis.

✓ I improve my typing by communicating with my friends on a daily basis.

Use 'by' rather than 'through communicating' for idiomatic expression. Simple present 'improve' is fine for habitual action.

× I also do typing games to improve my skills in typing.

✓ I also play typing games to improve my typing skills.

Use the verb 'play' with 'typing games' rather than 'do'. Also simplify 'skills in typing' to 'typing skills' for natural word order.