Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời khá tự nhiên nhưng cần rõ ràng, ngắn gọn và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Hãy mở đầu bằng câu chủ đề trực tiếp (Yes, I do) rồi giải thích ngắn gọn lý do cụ thể, tránh lặp từ (ví dụ: "repeat"). Sử dụng cụm từ miêu tả cảm xúc hoặc mục đích chụp (ví dụ: to capture memories, to explore perspectives). Nên giữ tối đa 3–4 câu và dùng liên từ đơn giản khi cần nối ý.

例: Yes, I do. I enjoy taking pictures of different views because each scene offers a unique perspective and mood. For example, a sunrise over the sea feels peaceful while city skylines at night look vibrant. I take photos to remember those moments and to explore new angles.

提案: Ý tưởng tốt nhưng cấu trúc câu lộn xộn và có lỗi từ vựng ("Greenville" không phù hợp). Nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề rõ ràng (I prefer...), so sánh hai lựa chọn bằng từ nối như "however" hoặc "while", và đưa ví dụ cụ thể về điều bạn thích ở mỗi nơi (ví dụ: architecture, parks, fresh air). Giữ 2–3 câu để câu trả lời cô đọng và mạch lạc.

例: I like both, but for different reasons. Urban areas feel more modern with interesting architecture and convenient facilities, while rural areas are greener and more peaceful, with fresh air and scenic landscapes. So it depends on my mood and the experience I want.

提案: Câu trả lời thiếu tính rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp (thì, từ nối) cùng nội dung mơ hồ ("most bright and is more"). Trước hết thừa nhận kinh nghiệm cá nhân ngắn gọn (I haven't traveled abroad), sau đó nói rõ sở thích giả định nếu được hỏi về cảnh nước ngoài và lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: cultural variety, architecture, colours). Dùng câu đầy đủ và các cụm từ mô tả cụ thể. Giữ 2–3 câu.

例: I haven't traveled abroad, so I can't compare directly. However, I imagine views in other countries would be appealing because they often show different cultures, architecture and colours that I don't see at home. I would love to visit such places to experience those differences in person.

× Yes, I really like it because I think in a different view it's not like repeat repeat again and I have a new person in the different views.

✓ Yes, I really like it because I think looking at different views is not repetitive and I see new scenes in each view.

Error: incorrect or missing gerund form and awkward phrasing. The verb 'like' should be followed by a gerund ('looking at') when describing an activity. 'Repeat repeat again' is ungrammatical and should be 'not repetitive'. 'I have a new person in the different views' is unclear; likely intended 'I see new scenes' or 'I discover new perspectives'. Suggestion: use 'looking at' + noun phrase and replace redundant words with precise nouns to make the sentence clear. (Grammar problem type ID: 8)

× I think both in urban areas I think more modern and more flexible, but in rural areas have more green Greenville and I think is more comfortable to see it.

✓ I think both are nice: urban areas are more modern and flexible, but rural areas have more greenery and I think they are more comfortable to look at.

Errors: missing subjects and subject-verb agreement. 'I think both in urban areas I think more modern' lacks proper verb and subject; use 'both are nice' then 'urban areas are'. 'But in rural areas have more green Greenville' misses subject and uses wrong noun 'Greenville' instead of 'greenery'. 'I think is more comfortable to see it' has wrong subject and pronoun; use 'they are more comfortable to look at'. Suggestion: ensure each clause has an explicit subject and correctly conjugated verb, and use correct nouns ('greenery'). (Grammar problem type ID: 27)

× I never go out my country so I think I will refer to view in another country because it I think is most bright and is more.

✓ I have never been outside my country, so I think I would prefer views in other countries because I think they are brighter and more varied.

Errors: incorrect prepositions and verb forms. 'Go out my country' should be 'been outside my country' or 'gone abroad'. 'Refer to view in another country' is incorrect; use 'prefer views in other countries'. 'Because it I think is most bright and is more' is ungrammatical and unclear; rewrite as 'because I think they are brighter and more varied'. Suggestion: use correct prepositions like 'outside' or 'in', correct perfect tense for life experience ('have never been'), and choose clear comparative adjectives. (Grammar problem type ID: 11)