Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Directly answer the examiner's question without turning it back to them. Give a brief reason or short example to expand. Keep it natural and concise (max 5 sentences). Use a topic sentence then one supporting detail with a linking word if needed.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. For example, I often photograph sunsets at the beach because the colors change quickly and it feels relaxing.

提案: Start with a clear topic sentence stating your preference, then give specific supporting details and a brief comparison using linking words (e.g., however, whereas). Avoid vague or incorrect phrases and keep sentences grammatical and concise.

例: I prefer views in rural areas because they offer more natural scenery, such as rolling hills and forests. However, urban views can be interesting too, with modern architecture and lively streets that show city life.

提案: Provide a direct answer followed by a brief reason or example to expand. Use linking words (e.g., because, although) to make the response coherent and give specific contrasts rather than a one-word reply.

例: I like views in both my own country and other countries because my country has familiar landscapes and cultural scenes, whereas traveling abroad lets me see different architectures and natural wonders that I haven't experienced before.

× Yes, I like.

✓ Yes, I do.

Student used 'I like' without an object or verb support; in response to a yes/no question 'Do you like...' the correct short answer uses the auxiliary 'do' (Yes, I do). Suggestion: use auxiliary verbs for short answers to yes/no questions (Yes, I do / No, I don't).

× I prefer views in rural area because in rural area you can see many beautiful nature views.

✓ I prefer views in rural areas because in rural areas you can see a lot of beautiful natural scenery.

The student omitted plural for 'rural area' and used awkward nouns 'nature views.' Use plural 'rural areas' when speaking generally. Replace 'many beautiful nature views' with 'a lot of beautiful natural scenery' or 'many beautiful natural views.' Also use article 'a lot of' or quantifier. Suggestion: use plural for general locations and use 'natural' as adjective before nouns like 'scenery.'

× But if you live in a urban area, it's all about the building of deal.

✓ But if you live in an urban area, it's all about buildings and deals.

Use the indefinite article 'an' before a vowel sound (an urban). The original phrase 'the building of deal' is ungrammatical and unclear. Likely intent: urban areas focus on buildings and business/deals, so use plural 'buildings' and 'deals' or phrase 'business deals.' Suggestion: use 'an' before vowel sounds and choose clear nouns or pluralize when speaking generally.