Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Старайтесь формулировать предложение более грамматично и ясно. Начните с прямого ответа, затем кратко объясните причину и приведите конкретный пример. Избегайте повторов (например, "looking in the photo, looking to photo") и неправильных времен. Работайте над связностью: используйте связки (because, for example, so) и правильную последовательность слов.

例: Yes, I do. I take photos so I can keep memories of places I visit; for example, when I look at a photo of a day out with friends, I can remember the people and the events clearly.

提案: Улучшите связность и полноту ответа: начните с чёткого утверждения, затем добавьте одно-две конкретные детали с использованием связующих слов. Избегайте фрагментов без глаголов (например, "mountain. Forests.") и повторов слов ("views such views").

例: I prefer rural views because I love nature; for instance, I enjoy photographing mountains and dense forests since they feel peaceful and offer interesting textures and colours.

提案: Сформулируйте более грамматично: используйте правильные времена и артикли, избегайте прямых переводов с вашего языка. Начните с ответа, затем объясните причину и приведите пример. Старайтесь использовать связующие слова (for example, because, since) и корректную форму глагола (have seen, enjoy seeing).

例: I prefer views in other countries because I haven't seen many of those places before; for example, visiting a seaside town abroad lets me experience different architecture and landscapes that I don't see at home.

× I think it's like memory when I had sometimes I remember this place, I just looking in the photo, looking to photo and remember this story or this time with friends or other people.

✓ I think it's like a memory: sometimes when I remember a place I just look at a photo and remember the story or the time I spent there with friends or other people.

This sentence has multiple structure problems: missing articles, wrong verb forms, incorrect word order and prepositions. Use 'a memory' to count the concept (article error), 'sometimes' should start the clause for clarity, 'when I remember a place' is correct present tense for recollection, 'I just look at a photo' uses correct verb form and preposition, and 'remember the story or the time I spent there' fixes verb tense and clarity. Suggestion: break long ideas into shorter clauses, ensure correct articles and use 'look at' not 'looking in/to'. Grammar problem type id:26

× I just looking in the photo, looking to photo and remember this story or this time with friends or other people.

✓ I just look at a photo and remember the story or the time I spent there with friends or other people.

Using 'looking' here is incorrect because the main clause requires the base form 'look' after 'I just'. Also use the preposition 'at' with 'look'. Use past participle 'spent' for the time experienced. Suggestion: use simple present for habitual or instantaneous recollection: 'I just look at a photo and remember...'. Grammar problem type id:10

× I just looking in the photo, looking to photo and remember this story or this time with friends or other people.

✓ I just look at a photo and remember the story or the time I spent there with friends or other people.

Prepositions 'in' and 'to' are incorrect with 'look' in this context. The correct collocation is 'look at a photo'. Also add 'there' after 'spent' to indicate location. Suggestion: learn common verb + preposition pairs such as 'look at', 'listen to', 'depend on'. Grammar problem type id:11

× I think it's like memory when I had sometimes I remember this place, I just looking in the photo, looking to photo and remember this story or this time with friends or other people.

✓ I think it's like a memory: sometimes when I remember a place I just look at a photo and remember the story or the time I spent there with friends or other people.

Missing articles: use 'a memory', 'a place', 'a photo', and 'the story' or 'the time' to specify. Articles help make meaning clear. Suggestion: use 'a' for non-specific singular nouns and 'the' for a specific item already mentioned. Grammar problem type id:22

× I prefer views of rural areas because I love nature. I love views such views of nature such as mountain. Forests.

✓ I prefer views of rural areas because I love nature. I love views of nature, such as mountains and forests.

Countable nouns need correct plural forms: 'mountain' should be 'mountains' and 'Forest s' should be combined into the same sentence with proper punctuation. Suggestion: use plural when speaking generally about types of landscape: 'mountains and forests'. Grammar problem type id:1

× Of course I prefer views of other countries because I never seen that.

✓ Of course I prefer views of other countries because I have never seen them.

The structure requires present perfect 'have never seen' rather than simple past 'never seen' to indicate life experience up to now. Also 'that' is vague; use 'them' to refer to 'views'. Suggestion: use 'have/has + past participle' for experiences: 'I have never seen'. Grammar problem type id:9

× Views of my country I see almost every day but new views I love it and I enjoy viewing other place.

✓ I see views of my country almost every day, but I love new views and enjoy seeing places in other countries.

Pronoun 'it' incorrectly refers to 'new views' (plural) and word order is awkward. Use 'I see' at the start and 'new views' needs no 'it'. Also 'viewing other place' should be 'seeing places in other countries' for clarity and plurality. Suggestion: match pronoun number to noun and use natural word order: subject + verb + object. Grammar problem type id:12