Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答要更自然流畅，避免停顿和填充词。开门见山先给出肯定或否定的观点，然后用一两句补充说明你的职业如何影响你对拍照的喜好。可以用更地道的表达替代重复的“uh”。

例: Yes, I enjoy photographing different views. As a professional photographer, I often look for interesting compositions and lighting, which makes exploring various scenes very rewarding.

提案: 内容要更具体、语法更准确。先用一句明确的主题句，然后用一两条具体原因支持，使用连接词如“because”或“as”并注意主谓一致与名词复数形式。避免模糊词语“like this”。

例: I prefer rural areas because they offer natural landscapes and wildlife that you rarely find in cities. For instance, I enjoy photographing forests, rivers and traditional cottages, which provide more peaceful and varied subjects.

提案: 回答要更凝练、有条理，减少重复填充词。先给出立场，然后列举两到三个具体理由并用连接词衔接。可以加入简短对比以增强说服力。

例: I prefer views in my own country because China has a huge variety of landscapes and rich cultural sites. For example, different provinces offer distinct scenery—from mountainous regions to coastal areas—and local traditions often add unique photographic opportunities.

× I prefer rural areas because it has animals, forests, all the building like this.

✓ I prefer rural areas because they have animals, forests, and buildings like this.

问题类型：名词单复数与代词一致。原句中主语是复数短语“rural areas”，但后半句使用了单数代词“it”和单数名词“building”。应该用复数代词“they”和复数名词“buildings”。建议：说复数主语时，后续代词和名词也要用复数形式。

× I prefer the views in our own country because I'm from China. We have a lot of beautiful views in every province, uh, like the mountains, rivers and forests, umm, and nice people here.

✓ I prefer the views in our own country because I'm from China. We have a lot of beautiful scenery in every province, like mountains, rivers, forests, and friendly people.

问题类型：代词/词语用法不够准确及词汇搭配问题。原句中重复使用“views”与后面列举的自然景观搭配不太自然，且“nice people here”在正式表达中可改为“friendly people”。建议：用更合适的名词“scenery”或直接列举景物，并将形容人时的口语词改为更合适的词。