Views— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
受験者
Yes I like umm. I also like to go trip. So taking a picture umm can can reserve. No umm I can I can field it.
試験官
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
受験者
I like umm rural areas as I'm living in Matsumoto. I like so beautiful mountain scenery umm because it is so beautiful only but also I can come when I see the.
試験官
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
受験者
Hmm. I prefer abuse or in other countries because I only like to go on a trip and I can. I wanna watch, I wanna see some other beautiful sceneries that can't, that I can't see in my own kind.
評価
総合
Part 1
Do you like taking pictures of different views?
スコア: 42.0提案: 発音と流暢さを改善し、回答を構造化して明確に伝える練習をしましょう。具体的には「あいまいな音（umm等）」を減らし、トピックセンテンスの後に1～2の具体例を簡潔に述べる練習をしてください。語彙は「capture」「memory」「scenery」など適切な単語に置き換えると良いです。
例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views. I often photograph landscapes when I travel because photos help me capture memories and details I might forget. For example, I like taking photos of mountain sunsets and coastal scenes to share with my friends.
Do you prefer views in urban areas or rural areas?
スコア: 48.0提案: 文を簡潔にし、理由と具体例を明確に述べる練習をしましょう。接続詞（because, so, for example）を使って理由と補足を整理し、冗長な言い直しを減らすと効果的です。また地名や具体的な風景描写を加えると説得力が増します。
例: I prefer rural areas because I live in Matsumoto and enjoy the mountain scenery. For example, I often hike nearby to photograph snow-capped peaks and pine forests, which feel peaceful compared to busy cities.
Do you prefer views in your own country or in other countries?
スコア: 44.0提案: 語彙の誤用（"abuse"や"kind"）を正し、はっきりとした理由を述べましょう。比較表現（in my country / abroad）と具体的な例（which places, what scenery）を使うと説得力が上がります。発音と語順にも注意して簡潔に話す練習をしてください。
例: I prefer views in other countries because traveling lets me see landscapes I don’t have at home. For instance, I’d love to visit Iceland to photograph glaciers and geysers, which are very different from the mountains around Matsumoto.
文法
× Yes I like umm. I also like to go trip. So taking a picture umm can can reserve. No umm I can I can field it.
✓ Yes, I do. I also like to go on trips. Taking pictures can preserve memories. No, I mean I can capture them.
The student used incorrect sentence structures and missing or wrong prepositions. 'I like' as a short answer needs auxiliary 'do'. 'Go trip' requires the preposition 'on' and plural 'trips' for general preference (Singular and plural + preposition issue). 'Taking a picture can can reserve' is ungrammatical: 'reserve' is wrong verb choice; use 'preserve memories' and eliminate duplicate 'can'. 'I can I can field it' is unclear; likely meant 'I can capture them'. Suggestions: use auxiliary verbs for short answers, use 'go on a trip' or 'go on trips', avoid repeating words, choose correct verbs ('preserve', 'capture'), and ensure pronouns agree with plural/singular items.'},{
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