Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Make the reply more natural and grammatically correct. Use a clear topic sentence, avoid unnecessary articles and verb forms, and keep it concise (1–2 sentences). Add a brief reason or example to enrich the answer.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because photography helps me notice details I might otherwise miss. For example, I often photograph sunsets and city skylines when I travel.

提案: Answer directly with a clear preference sentence, then give specific reasons using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid vague phrases like "no facilities" — be precise about which facilities and why they matter for views or photography.

例: I prefer urban views because cities offer a variety of architectural styles and vibrant street scenes. For instance, there are historic buildings, modern skyscrapers, and lively markets that make interesting photographic subjects.

提案: Begin with a direct statement of preference and then give clear, specific supporting details. Correct grammar (use articles and plural/singular properly) and use linking words to improve coherence. Mention particular landscapes or landmarks as examples.

例: I prefer views in my own country because it has a spectacular coastline and many rivers and mountains. For example, the Kolkalam coast offers dramatic cliffs at sunset, and the nearby mountain ranges provide excellent hiking and panoramic views.

× Yes, I do like to click a photos of different views.

✓ Yes, I do like to click photos of different views.

The noun 'photos' should not be preceded by the indefinite article 'a'. Using 'a' before a plural noun is incorrect. Remove 'a' or change to singular: 'a photo'. Suggestion: use 'click photos' or 'take a photo' depending on singular/plural intent.

× I really suggest urban areas because in rural areas there is no facilities, but in urban areas we are facilitated by all hospitals and schools.

✓ I really prefer urban areas because in rural areas there are no facilities, but in urban areas we have all hospitals and schools.

Multiple issues: 'suggest' is the wrong verb; 'prefer' fits the question asking preference. 'There is no facilities' is incorrect because 'facilities' is plural so use 'there are no facilities' (subject-verb agreement and plural). 'We are facilitated by all hospitals and schools' is awkward; use 'we have all hospitals and schools' to express availability. Also 'in rural areas' and 'in urban areas' prepositions are correct but sentence structure improved. Suggestion: use 'prefer' and match verb number with plural nouns.

× I do prefer the view in my country because my country surrounded by the coast of Kolkalam coast and the amount river, mountains and everything.

✓ I prefer the scenery in my country because my country is surrounded by the Kolkalam coast and many rivers, mountains, and so on.

Use simple present 'I prefer' instead of 'I do prefer' for natural speech; 'my country surrounded by' lacks the verb 'is' (passive construction needs auxiliary). 'the coast of Kolkalam coast' is redundant; use 'the Kolkalam coast'. 'the amount river' is incorrect word choice and form; use 'many rivers'. Also 'scenery' or 'views' is more natural than 'the view'. Suggestion: include 'is' for passive, use correct nouns and quantifiers 'many'.