Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Câu trả lời nên rõ ràng hơn, dùng thì và ngữ pháp đúng, tránh từ thừa và tiếng ồn (uh). Nên có câu chủ đề trực tiếp, sau đó thêm 1–2 câu chi tiết cụ thể với liên từ để mạch lạc. Ví dụ cần nêu nơi chụp, lúc chụp, và vì sao (màu sắc, ánh sáng).

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing the atmosphere and colors. For example, I often take photos at the park in the morning when the light is soft, and I focus on leaves and reflections to show the mood.

提案: Cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi so sánh (urban vs rural) rồi giải thích cụ thể. Tránh từ lặp và tiếng lầm, dùng từ liên kết như 'because' hoặc 'however'. Thêm ví dụ minh họa (ví dụ: khung cảnh, tiếng động, không khí).

例: I prefer rural views because they make me feel comfortable and peaceful. For instance, I like quiet fields and small rivers where the air is fresh, which helps me relax compared with noisy city streets.

提案: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có lỗi từ vựng/ngữ pháp. Trả lời trực tiếp (own country or other countries), đưa lý do cụ thể (ví dụ: different culture, architecture) và kết luận ngắn. Dùng liên từ như 'because' hoặc 'so' để nối ý.

例: I prefer views in other countries because I enjoy exploring new landscapes and cultures. For example, seeing historic architecture or coastal scenery abroad often gives me fresh ideas and inspiration.

× Yes, I enjoy taking picture of the different view because I love capture the atmosphere and color. Earthly. Uh, I often know. I often take photo at the park.

✓ Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of different views because I love capturing the atmosphere and colors. I often go to the park to take photos.

Multiple errors: 'picture' and 'view' should be plural when speaking generally (quantifier issue). 'Love capture' needs the gerund 'capturing' after verbs like 'love' when referring to activities. 'Color' should be plural 'colors' to match 'atmosphere' as multiple aspects. 'Earthly. Uh, I often know.' are non-grammatical fragments and likely disfluencies; they were removed and replaced with a coherent sentence 'I often go to the park to take photos.' Also 'take photo' corrected to 'take photos' for plural/general reference. Suggestion: use plural nouns when speaking generally, use gerund after verbs like 'enjoy' or 'love', and avoid filler fragments in final responses.

× I love living in a rural area because I feel comfortable and peaceful. Ally Allison, atmosphere and uh.

✓ I love living in a rural area because I feel comfortable and peaceful; I also enjoy the atmosphere.

The original had an unclear fragment 'Ally Allison, atmosphere and uh.' which is a sentence structure error. It seems the speaker intended to add that they like the atmosphere. The correction joins the ideas into a coherent sentence and uses 'also' to add information. Suggestion: remove unclear fillers and complete the thought with a clear subject and verb.

× I like your view in the other country because I feel explore newer, newly and.

✓ I like the views in other countries because I feel excited to explore new places.

Problems: 'your view in the other country' incorrectly uses 'your' and 'the other country' — unclear reference; corrected to 'the views in other countries' for general preference. 'I feel explore newer, newly and.' is ungrammatical: after 'feel' you need an adjective or infinitive structure ('feel like exploring') or rephrase. 'Newer, newly' incorrect word forms; replaced with 'new places'. Suggestion: use correct pronouns for general statements ('other countries'), and use correct verb forms or adjectives after 'feel' ('feel like exploring' or 'feel excited to explore').