Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答自然且相关，但略显冗长并有少量重复（例如“remember special moments and places”与“relaxing hobby”信息重复情感）。建议在第一句给出明确立场后，用1–2句具体细节支持（如拍摄哪些景物、用什么设备或拍摄目的），并使用连接词（for example, because）使表达更紧凑。注意句子不超过5句。

例: Yes, I do. I love capturing landscapes and cityscapes when I travel because photos help me preserve memories and practice my composition skills. For example, I often focus on sunrise and sunset scenes using my phone or a small mirrorless camera to get soft lighting.

提案: 回答清晰具体，内容贴合题意並含有细节（列举山、河、田野和日落）。建议用一个链接词（such as, for instance）或简短比较句强化对比，并修正小语法问题（“take photo of”→“take photos of”）。保持答案在最多5句内即可。

例: I prefer rural views because they offer natural scenery like mountains, rivers and fields, which feel peaceful and restorative. For instance, I often take photos of sunsets in the countryside to capture the changing colours and enjoy the fresh air.

提案: 回答表达了观点和理由，但存在语法与用词问题（“landscapes feels”→“landscapes feel”；“fresh perspective online”意义不明，可能想说“a fresh perspective”）。建议简化并具体化理由（比如举例某国的独特风景或建筑），并用连接词（because, for example）使逻辑更清晰。

例: I prefer views in other countries because their landscapes often feel more exotic and varied. For example, I enjoyed the dramatic coastal cliffs in Portugal and the colourful temples in Thailand, which gave me a new appreciation of different cultures and architectural styles.

× I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel.

✓ I love capturing beautiful scenery whenever I travel.

无错误。句中“capturing”作动名词与动词“love”搭配正确，无需修改。

× Taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

✓ Taking photos helps me remember special moments and places, and I really enjoy sharing my pictures on social media with friends.

无错误。句中“Taking”和“sharing”为动名词，搭配正确。

× I love nature scenery like mountains, rivers and fields.

✓ I love natural scenery like mountains, rivers, and fields.

“nature scenery”搭配不当，应使用形容词“natural”修饰“scenery”。这是词类搭配问题，按列表中最接近的为“Singular and plural issue”（单复数问题），但实为形容词使用错误。建议记住固定搭配：natural scenery。

× It's much more peaceful and relaxing and I always feel refreshed when I take photo of sunsets or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

✓ It's much more peaceful and relaxing, and I always feel refreshed when I take photos of sunsets or just enjoy the fresh air in the countryside.

“take photo”应为复数或不定冠词结构“take photos”或“take a photo”。依据上下文习惯用复数，故改为“take photos”。这是名词单复数使用，归入“Verb + -ing form”附近条目，但主要为单复数错误。建议注意动词短语“take photos”固定用法。

× I actually prefer the views in other countries because foreign landscapes feels more exotic and exciting.

✓ I actually prefer the views in other countries because foreign landscapes feel more exotic and exciting.

主语“foreign landscapes”为复数，谓语动词应使用原形“feel”而不是“feels”。这是第三人称单数动词形式使用错误。建议确认主语是否为单数再选择动词形式。

× I love experiencing new cultures and seeing different styles of architecture, and traveling abroad always gives me a fresh perspective online.

✓ I love experiencing new cultures and seeing different styles of architecture, and traveling abroad always gives me a fresh perspective.

句末的“online”与句意不符，造成句子结构和语义混乱。应删除“online”使句子通顺。建议写作时注意语义逻辑，避免无关副词插入。