Views— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap kısa ve anlaşılır, ancak dil bilgisi ve kelime seçimi düzeltilmeli. "a picture of the nature" yerine "pictures of nature" gibi doğru ifadeler kullanılmalı. Ayrıca tek bir cümleden sonra kısa bir neden veya örnek ekleyerek cevabı 2-3 cümleye genişletebilirsiniz. Öneri: 1) İsimleri çoğul veya uygun artikellerle kullanın (pictures of nature, the beach). 2) Kısa neden ekleyin (because I enjoy...). 3) 3 cümleyi aşmamaya dikkat edin.

例: Yes, I enjoy taking pictures of nature and the beach because the scenery is peaceful and colorful. For example, I like capturing the sunrise over the sea to show the changing colors of the sky.

提案: Cümle yapısı karışık ve çelişkili; hem "urban" hem de "nature" kelimeleri birlikte yanlış kullanılmış. "depends to my mood" yerine "depends on my mood" ve "I enjoy being in nature" gibi doğru ifadeler kullanılmalı. Ayrıca tercih açıkça belirtilmeli ve kısa bir neden verilmelidir. Öneri: 1) Doğru prepozisyonları kullanın (depends on). 2) Tutarlı bir tercih belirtin. 3) Bağlaç kullanarak mantıklı destek cümlesi ekleyin.

例: It depends on my mood, but I usually prefer rural areas because I enjoy being in nature and finding peaceful spots. However, when I want variety and architecture, I choose urban settings.

提案: Cümle çok uzun ve dil bilgisi hataları var (ör. "feel like in home", "when I came home", "makes me happier"). Cümleleri bölüp açık bir yapı kullanın: bir konu cümlesi ve 1-2 destekleyici cümle. Ayrıca daha spesifik nedenler verin (alışılmış ortam, aile, kültür). Öneri: 1) Kısa, doğru zaman ve yapı kullanın (I feel at home; when I come home). 2) Spesifik nedenler ekleyin. 3) Gereksiz tekrarlardan kaçının.

例: I prefer views in my own country because I feel at home there and it relaxes me. For instance, familiar landscapes and local culture make me feel comfortable, so I enjoy sightseeing there more than abroad.

× Yes, I like to take a picture of the nature and the beach.

✓ Yes, I like to take pictures of nature and the beach.

The definite article 'the' is unnecessary before uncountable noun 'nature' and general plural 'pictures' fits context. Use plural 'pictures' to indicate taking photos in general. Suggestion: remove 'the' before 'nature' and change 'a picture' to 'pictures'. Grammar problem type ID: 22

× Actually it depends to my mood, but usually I prefer urban areas because I enjoy it being in nature.

✓ Actually it depends on my mood, but usually I prefer urban areas because I enjoy being in nature.

The correct preposition is 'depend on' not 'depend to'. Also 'enjoy it being in nature' is ungrammatical; 'enjoy being in nature' is correct because 'enjoy' is followed by a gerund without 'it'. Remove the unnecessary 'it'. Grammar problem type ID: 11

× I prefer my own country because I feel like in home when I'm in my country of course I do like the other countries views but when I came home I feel relaxed and makes me happier.

✓ I prefer my own country because I feel at home when I'm in my country. Of course I also like the views of other countries, but when I come home I feel relaxed and happier.

Multiple issues: 'feel like in home' should be 'feel at home' (idiom). 'other countries views' needs possessive or 'views of other countries'. 'when I came home' mixes past tense; maintain present: 'when I come home'. 'makes me happier' must agree with subject; use 'I feel relaxed and happier' or 'it makes me happier'. Here 'I feel... and happier' keeps the subject consistent. Suggestions: use correct idiom 'feel at home', use 'views of other countries' or 'other countries' views', keep consistent present tense 'come', and ensure verb agrees with subject. Grammar problem type ID: 5