School— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: You should answer the examiner's question directly instead of repeating it. Provide a clear and concise response about the location of your school, using natural English.

例: My school is located in the city centre, near the main library.

提案: Avoid repeating the examiner's question. Instead, give a direct answer and support it with a reason or example to make your response more natural and effective.

例: Yes, I like my school because the teachers are very supportive and the environment is friendly.

提案: Try to answer the question directly and avoid repeating it. Also, ensure your sentences are grammatically correct and relevant to the question. Use linking words to add supporting details.

例: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it has quiet classrooms and a well-stocked library.

提案: Instead of repeating the question, provide a clear description of your school's environment. Use correct sentence structure and linking words to make your answer coherent.

例: The environment at my school is peaceful and green, with many trees and open spaces where students can relax.

提案: Your answer is unclear and does not address the question. You should provide a direct response explaining why interest in study is important, using simple and clear language.

例: Interest in study is very important because it helps students stay motivated and learn more effectively.

× Do you think your school is good place yesterday?

✓ Did you think your school was a good place yesterday?

The original sentence incorrectly uses the present tense 'is' with the past time indicator 'yesterday'. The verb tense should match the time reference, so 'did you think' and 'was' are used to indicate past tense. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'good place'.

× What does the environment like that your school?

✓ What is the environment like at your school?

The original sentence has incorrect sentence structure and word order. The correct question form is 'What is the environment like at your school?' where 'is' is the linking verb and 'like' describes the environment. 'Does' is not used here because 'environment' is singular and the verb 'like' is not an action verb requiring 'do/does'.

× Colored contact in interest in study.

✓ Interest in study is important.

The original sentence is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It lacks a verb and clear subject. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject and verb to express the idea that interest in study is important.