School— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to combine your answer into one clear sentence and add a little more detail to make it sound natural. For example, you can say the location and the type of school in one sentence.

例: My school, Joyce School, is located in Phnom Penh, Cambodia, and it is a well-known private school.

提案: Improve grammar by using correct verb forms and avoid redundancy. Also, explain why you like the school with clear reasons and linking words.

例: Yes, I love my school a lot because it offers three languages: Chinese, Khmer, and English, which helps me learn more effectively.

提案: Use correct sentence structures and linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, provide specific reasons why the school is good for studying.

例: Yes, my school is a large educational institution that teaches students everything they need to learn, and it is a fun place where students enjoy studying.

提案: Focus on clear sentence structure and correct vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas and describe the environment more specifically.

例: In front of my school, there is a large and beautiful flower garden. Inside, there is another garden, a big Cambodian flag, and a spacious hall.

提案: Clarify your ideas and use correct grammar. Use linking words to explain why interest in study is important with specific reasons.

例: Interest in studying is very important because if we are interested, we can learn better, master other languages, and have opportunities to study abroad for a better future.

× Yes, it's all I love my school a lot because the school have three language Chinese, Kamai and English.

✓ Yes, I love my school a lot because the school has three languages: Chinese, Kamai, and English.

The subject 'school' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'. Also, 'language' should be plural 'languages' because there are three languages mentioned. Use a colon to introduce the list of languages.

× That school that teach students on what they need to learn.

✓ That school teaches students what they need to learn.

The verb 'teach' should be in the third person singular present tense 'teaches' to agree with the singular subject 'school'. Also, 'on' is unnecessary here and should be removed.

× And the inside of my school also have a flower garden.

✓ And the inside of my school also has a flower garden.

The subject 'inside' is singular, so the verb should be 'has' not 'have'.

× It has a big Cambodian flag and it's the hall is kind of big.

✓ It has a big Cambodian flag and the hall is kind of big.

The phrase 'it's the hall is' is incorrect. It should be 'the hall is'. The contraction 'it's' (it is) is unnecessary and incorrect here.