School— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくいです。特に、場所の表現や時制の使い方に注意しましょう。また、文を簡潔にまとめ、自然な英語表現を心がけてください。

例: My school is located in the city center of New Zealand. I have been studying abroad here for half a year. There is much more nature here compared to Japan.

提案: 答えが否定的であることは問題ありませんが、理由の表現が不自然で文法的にも誤りがあります。複数形の扱いや形容詞の使い方に注意し、より丁寧で自然な表現を使いましょう。

例: Actually, I don't like my school very much because the traffic is always chaotic, and some international student teachers can be quite annoying.

提案: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が不明瞭です。特に動詞の時制や単数・複数形の使い方に注意し、具体的で明確な理由を述べるようにしましょう。

例: Definitely yes, because the facilities are new and well-maintained. Also, they offer many subjects that other schools do not have.

提案: 内容は良いですが、文法の誤りが目立ちます。特に単数・複数の一致や冠詞の使い方に注意し、より自然な表現を心がけてください。

例: The environment is quite good compared to my Japanese high school. The people are friendly, and the teachers care a lot about international students.

提案: 文が不完全で意味が伝わりにくいです。前置詞の使い方や時制、文の構成に注意し、具体的な理由や経験を明確に述べるようにしましょう。

例: I have a strong interest in studying because I have attended a private school since I was three years old. I always think about my assessments to improve my skills.

× My school located in New Zealand of center of city.

✓ My school is located in the center of the city in New Zealand.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to correctly form the present tense 'There is' structure. 'Located' needs a helping verb to indicate the state of being. Also, 'of center of city' is incorrect preposition usage; it should be 'in the center of the city.'

× I'm studying abroad from half a year ago and.

✓ I have been studying abroad for half a year.

The phrase 'from half a year ago' is incorrect for expressing duration; the present perfect continuous tense 'have been studying' with 'for half a year' is appropriate to indicate an action continuing up to now. The sentence was also incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× There have a many nature than Japan.

✓ There is more nature than in Japan.

'There have' is incorrect; 'There is' should be used for singular or uncountable nouns. 'A many nature' is incorrect; 'nature' is uncountable and 'more' is used for comparison. Also, 'than Japan' should be 'than in Japan' to correctly compare locations.

× Actually no, because the traffic are always crazy and my international student teachers are too annoying for me.

✓ Actually no, because the traffic is always crazy and my international student teachers are too annoying for me.

'Traffic' is a singular noun and requires the singular verb 'is' instead of 'are'. The rest of the sentence is correct.

× Definitely yes, because the facility get more new.

✓ Definitely yes, because the facilities are getting newer.

'Facility' should be plural 'facilities' to match the context. 'Get more new' is incorrect; the present continuous form 'are getting' and comparative adjective 'newer' should be used to indicate ongoing improvement.

× And they have many subject at other school.

✓ And they have many subjects at other schools.

'Subject' should be plural 'subjects' to match 'many'. 'School' should be plural 'schools' to indicate multiple other schools.

× The people are nice and the teacher care about international student a lot.

✓ The people are nice and the teachers care about international students a lot.

'Teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with 'people' and context. 'Care' needs to agree with plural subject 'teachers'. 'International student' should be plural 'international students'.

× I have huge interest in study because I used to go private school since I was three years old and I always think about my assessment to improve my.

✓ I have a huge interest in studying because I have been going to a private school since I was three years old and I always think about my assessments to improve myself.

'Interest in study' should be 'interest in studying' using gerund. 'Used to go private school' is incorrect; 'have been going to a private school' is better to indicate continuous action. 'Assessment' should be plural 'assessments'. 'Improve my' is incomplete; 'improve myself' is correct reflexive pronoun usage.