School— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答时应注意时态一致性，描述环境时应使用现在时。此外，句子结构可以更自然流畅，避免重复和语法错误。

例: My school is located in Tianhu, Guangzhou, near the beautiful Heulu Mountains. The air there is always fresh, which makes it a pleasant place to study.

提案: 回答应更流畅，避免语法错误，如“help me something about study and life”应改为“help me with my studies and daily life”。同时，使用连接词使句子更连贯。

例: Yes, I like my school because I have many Chinese classmates and professional teachers who are friendly and help me with my studies and daily life.

提案: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，如“can hardworking”应为“can work hard”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，并注意语法正确。

例: Yes, I think my school is a good place to study because it is very quiet. We have a big and comfortable library where I can focus and work hard on my homework.

提案: 回答应更具体，使用复数形式如“playgrounds”或“a playground”，并且“document canteen”表达不清，应改为“dormitory canteen”或“school canteen”。建议丰富细节并使用连接词。

例: The environment at my school is good. Although it is small, we have a playground, a library, a canteen, and several teaching buildings.

提案: 回答中语法错误较多，如“someone have”应为“someone has”，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的表达和连接词，丰富内容。

例: As is well known, interest is the best teacher. If someone has an interest in studying, they can make significant contributions in that field.

× My school is located in Tianhu, Guangzhou and is nearby Heulu Mountains and it's so beautiful and the air was fresh.

✓ My school is located in Tianhu, Guangzhou and is near the Heulu Mountains. It's so beautiful and the air is fresh.

句中“is nearby Heulu Mountains”中，'nearby'是副词，不能直接修饰名词，应该用介词短语'near the Heulu Mountains'。另外，'the air was fresh'时态不一致，描述环境应使用一般现在时，改为'the air is fresh'。

× Yes, I like my school because I have Chinese classmates and professional teachers and they are friendly and help me something about study and life.

✓ Yes, I like my school because I have Chinese classmates and professional teachers. They are friendly and help me with something about study and life.

句中'help me something about study and life'缺少介词，正确表达应为'help me with something'，表示帮助某事。

× Yeah, our school is so quiet and we have a big library and I can study in the library, it's comfortable. And when I study in library I can hardworking to do my homework.

✓ Yeah, our school is so quiet and we have a big library where I can study comfortably. When I study in the library, I can work hard to do my homework.

'I can hardworking'中'hardworking'是形容词，不能作为副词使用，正确用法是'work hard'。另外，'study in library'缺少冠词，应该是'study in the library'。

× Although our school is small, we have playground, library, document canteen and teaching building.

✓ Although our school is small, we have a playground, a library, a document canteen, and a teaching building.

列举名词时，单数可数名词前应加冠词'a'，否则语法错误。

× As well known interest is the best teachers. If someone have interest in study, he or she can make contribution in this area.

✓ As is well known, interest is the best teacher. If someone has interest in study, he or she can make a contribution in this area.

'interest is the best teachers'中，主语单数，谓语应对应单数，'teachers'应改为单数'teacher'。'someone have'主语单数，谓语动词应为'has'。'make contribution'前应加不定冠词'a'。