School— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer provides relevant information but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Try to use simpler, clearer sentences and correct word choices. Also, avoid redundancy and ensure your sentences are coherent.

例: My school is located in the city centre, which makes it very easy to reach by public transport. It is surrounded by several parks and shops, creating a pleasant environment for students.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Focus on subject-verb agreement and sentence structure. Also, try to combine ideas smoothly using linking words.

例: Yes, I do. I like my school because it provides a friendly and supportive environment where I can learn and grow. Moreover, the teachers are very kind and always willing to help us.

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains several grammatical errors and incomplete ideas. Try to express your points clearly and use correct grammar. Avoid vague phrases and ensure your sentences are complete and logical.

例: Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because it offers a quiet and well-equipped environment that helps me learn better. The teachers are supportive and provide clear explanations, which make learning easier.

提案: Your answer has some spelling and grammatical errors. Use correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent and natural.

例: The environment at my school is quiet and welcoming. There are plenty of green spaces and well-maintained gardens, which create a peaceful atmosphere for studying and relaxation.

提案: Your answer shows good ideas but contains grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. Use correct word forms and sentence structures. Also, try to link your ideas smoothly for better coherence.

例: Interest in study is extremely important because it helps students engage deeply with the material. When learners are interested, they tend to retain information better and perform well academically.

× It is super surrounded by several parks and shops, creating leaves in a pleasant environment for student.

✓ It is surrounded by several parks and shops, creating a pleasant environment for students.

The word 'super' is incorrectly used as an adverb here and should be removed. 'Leaves in a pleasant environment' is incorrect; it should be 'creating a pleasant environment'. Also, 'student' should be plural 'students' to match the context.

× It is super surrounded by several parks and shops, creating leaves in a pleasant environment for student.

✓ It is surrounded by several parks and shops, creating a pleasant environment for students.

The phrase 'creating leaves in a pleasant environment' is incorrect. 'Leaves' is not appropriate here; the correct phrase is 'creating a pleasant environment'.

× It is provide a friendly and supportive environment where I can learn and grow.

✓ It provides a friendly and supportive environment where I can learn and grow.

The verb 'provide' should be in the third person singular present tense 'provides' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× The teacher are very kind and also and always willing to help us.

✓ The teachers are very kind and always willing to help us.

The subject 'teacher' is singular but the verb 'are' is plural. It should be plural 'teachers' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. Also, 'and also and always' is redundant; 'and always' suffices.

× Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because it offers an quiet and complete environment that helps me a better.

✓ Yes, I believe my school is a good place to study because it offers a quiet and complete environment that helps me improve.

The article 'an' is incorrect before the consonant sound in 'quiet'; it should be 'a quiet'. The phrase 'helps me a better' is incomplete and unclear; it should be 'helps me improve' or 'helps me become better'.

× The teacher are supportive and provide clear explanation with mixed learning easier.

✓ The teachers are supportive and provide clear explanations that make learning easier.

The subject 'teacher' should be plural 'teachers' to agree with the plural verb 'are'. 'Explanation' should be plural 'explanations'. The phrase 'with mixed learning easier' is unclear and corrected to 'that make learning easier'.

× Additionally, the school has a will.

✓ Additionally, the school has a strong will to succeed.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'strong will to succeed' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.

× The environment at my school is quite and welcoming.

✓ The environment at my school is quiet and welcoming.

The word 'quite' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'quiet' to describe a calm environment.

× There are a plant of green space and will maintain a gardens which create a peaceful atmosphere for studying and relaxation.

✓ There are plenty of green spaces and well-maintained gardens which create a peaceful atmosphere for studying and relaxation.

The phrase 'a plant of green space' is incorrect; it should be 'plenty of green spaces'. 'Will maintain a gardens' is incorrect; it should be 'well-maintained gardens'.

× Interesting in study is extremely important because it improves students to engage deeply with the UH material.

✓ Interest in study is extremely important because it helps students engage deeply with the material.

'Interesting' is an adjective; the noun 'interest' is correct here. 'Improves students to engage' is incorrect; it should be 'helps students engage'. 'UH' is unclear and removed for clarity.

× When learners are generally interested, they tend to retain information better and perform well academic.

✓ When learners are generally interested, they tend to retain information better and perform well academically.

The adverb 'academically' is needed to modify the verb 'perform'. 'Perform well academic' is incorrect.