School— Part 1 採点レポート
会話
Part 1
試験官
Where is your school?
受験者
I'd send lithium off High School of Economics, which has five campuses around Moscow. My mine is located in the city center.
試験官
Do you like your school?
受験者
Yes, I love my school. I'm transferred here in 9th grade and I really enjoy it because of the supportive teachers and friendly classmates.
試験官
Do you think your school is a good place to study?
受験者
Yes, definitely. I genuinely believe that it's one of the best schools in Moscow because of the high academic performance and great teachers.
試験官
What is the environment like at your school?
受験者
The environment in my school is friendly yet serious because the school is trying to focus on its academic performance and consequently we have to study hard to give good results.
試験官
How important is interest in study?
受験者
I believe interested in studying is essential because motivation alone may fade over time, while if you are genuinely interested in your subject, learning becomes more enjoyable and.
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総合
文法
× I'd send lithium off High School of Economics, which has five campuses around Moscow.
✓ I attend the Higher School of Economics, which has five campuses around Moscow.
The phrase 'I'd send lithium off' is incorrect and does not convey the intended meaning. The correct expression to indicate school attendance is 'I attend'. Also, 'High School of Economics' should be 'Higher School of Economics' if referring to the known institution. The preposition 'off' is incorrect here; 'of' is used in the school's name.
× My mine is located in the city center.
✓ Mine is located in the city center.
The phrase 'My mine' is redundant and incorrect. The possessive pronoun 'mine' already indicates possession, so 'my' is unnecessary and incorrect here.
× I'm transferred here in 9th grade and I really enjoy it because of the supportive teachers and friendly classmates.
✓ I transferred here in 9th grade and I really enjoy it because of the supportive teachers and friendly classmates.
The phrase 'I'm transferred' incorrectly uses the present continuous passive form. The correct past tense active form is 'I transferred' to indicate a completed action in the past.
× I believe interested in studying is essential because motivation alone may fade over time, while if you are genuinely interested in your subject, learning becomes more enjoyable and.
✓ I believe being interested in studying is essential because motivation alone may fade over time, while if you are genuinely interested in your subject, learning becomes more enjoyable.
The phrase 'I believe interested in studying' lacks a proper subject and verb structure. Adding 'being' forms the gerund phrase 'being interested', which functions correctly as the subject. Also, the sentence ends abruptly with 'and.' which is incomplete and should be removed for clarity.
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