School— Part 1 採点レポート

× My school is in my hometown Jamalpur Islampur uh my the name of my school is JJKM Girls High School and College.

✓ My school is in my hometown Jamalpur Islampur. The name of my school is JJKM Girls High School and College.

The phrase 'my the name' is incorrect because 'the' is a definite article that should not be preceded by 'my' in this context. The correct form is 'The name of my school'. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed punctuation to separate ideas.

× It is a great natural beauty.

✓ It is a place of great natural beauty.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'great natural beauty' as a predicate adjective without a proper noun. The correction clarifies that the school is a place characterized by great natural beauty.

× I love to school very much.

✓ I love my school very much.

The phrase 'love to school' is incorrect because 'love' as a verb of liking is followed by a noun, not a verb or preposition. The correct phrase is 'love my school'.

× At those time I enjoyed it very much because it is a place where I can study and also I get to know a lot of friends.

✓ At those times, I enjoyed it very much because it is a place where I can study and also get to know a lot of friends.

The phrase 'At those time' should be plural 'times' to match the plural context. Also, 'I get to know' is better as 'get to know' to maintain parallel structure and avoid unnecessary pronoun repetition.

× There are many extracurricular activities that we can do in the school and.

✓ There are many extracurricular activities that we can do in the school.

The sentence ends with an incomplete conjunction 'and' without completing the thought, which is a sentence structure error. Removing 'and' completes the sentence properly.

× The environment of my school is very helpful to study and growth.

✓ The environment of my school is very helpful for studying and growth.

The phrase 'helpful to study and growth' is incorrect because 'helpful' is followed by 'for' plus gerund or noun. 'Helpful for studying and growth' is the correct form.

× My personal growth students part personality.

✓ My personal growth and students' part in personality development.

The original sentence is incomplete and unclear, lacking proper structure. The correction clarifies the intended meaning by connecting ideas properly.

× It is a great place where teachers and students can discuss their topics or anything friendly.

✓ It is a great place where teachers and students can discuss their topics or anything in a friendly manner.

The phrase 'anything friendly' is incorrect; it needs a prepositional phrase like 'in a friendly manner' to correctly modify the verb 'discuss'.

× They are very supportive. Also the friends are very supportive there.

✓ They are very supportive. Also, the friends there are very supportive.

The sentence needed a comma after 'Also' and better placement of 'there' to clarify the location related to 'friends'.

× I think it's really important to interest in the study because without study we cannot go further to the world and we can't get a good job.

✓ I think it's really important to have interest in studying because without study we cannot go further in the world and we can't get a good job.

The phrase 'important to interest in the study' is incorrect; it should be 'important to have interest in studying'. Also, 'go further to the world' should be 'go further in the world'.

× Without studying hard. You also cannot be a good person either.

✓ Without studying hard, you also cannot be a good person.

The first part is a sentence fragment. Combining the two parts into one sentence with a comma corrects the structure.

× Without studying, we cannot know anything.

✓ Without studying, we cannot learn anything.

The verb 'know' is not typically used with 'without studying' in this context. 'Learn' is more appropriate to express gaining knowledge through study.

× I think it's very important in interest in study and school is the best place that uh, first we grow interest in uh, study, studying is really important for our further future and also get a good job.

✓ I think it's very important to have interest in study, and school is the best place where we first develop interest in studying. Studying is really important for our future and to get a good job.

The phrase 'important in interest in study' is incorrect; it should be 'important to have interest in study'. Also, the sentence was run-on and needed to be split and clarified for better understanding.

× Without knowledge, we cannot do anything.

✓ Without knowledge, we cannot do anything.

This sentence is correct and does not require correction.