School— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答中有语法错误和表达不自然的地方，例如“On my school is in Taipei”应改为“My school is in Taipei”。建议简洁明了地回答问题，并避免重复。

例: My school is Tenkong University, located in Taipei near a big river.

提案: 回答较简单，缺少具体细节。建议增加更多具体原因，使用连接词使回答更连贯。

例: Yes, I like my school because I have many good friends there, and the teachers are very supportive.

提案: 回答内容较丰富，但表达重复且有语法错误。建议简化句子结构，使用连接词使表达更流畅。

例: Yes, my school is a good place to study because it has a large library with computers, and I often study there with my friends.

提案: 回答中有过多的犹豫词，影响流畅度。建议减少填充词，使用更准确的词汇描述环境。

例: The environment at my school is peaceful and quiet, with many plants that make me feel relaxed.

提案: 回答表达不够自然，重复使用“study”。建议使用更丰富的词汇和句式表达观点。

例: I believe having an interest in studying is very important because it helps us gain knowledge and prepare for our future.

× On my school is in Taipei, I'm nearby a big river.

✓ My school is in Taipei, near a big river.

句子中使用了错误的介词短语“On my school”，应直接说“My school is in Taipei”，并且“I'm nearby a big river”应改为“near a big river”来正确表达位置关系。

× you can use computer and study in the in the library

✓ you can use computers and study in the library

“use computer”缺少复数形式，应为“use computers”；“in the in the library”重复，应去掉多余的“in the”。

× you can use computer and study in the in the library

✓ you can use computers and study in the library

“computer”应使用复数形式“computers”，因为这里指的是图书馆里多台电脑。

× you will feel, I will feel relaxed.

✓ you will feel relaxed.

句子中“you will feel, I will feel relaxed”表达重复且不自然，应简化为“you will feel relaxed”。

× we have to study for more more knowledge and for our future.

✓ we have to study for more knowledge and for our future.

“more more knowledge”重复，应去掉一个“more”。