School— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Try to avoid filler words like 'uh' and keep your answer concise and focused. Also, directly answer the question first, then add supporting details with clear linking words to improve coherence.

例: My school is located in Xinju, a central city in Taiwan. It is well-known for its large pool of talented technological specialists, which attracts many graduates to work there.

提案: Avoid redundancy such as 'Yes, exactly.' Start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words like 'for example' and 'in addition' effectively. Also, correct minor grammar errors like 'a many' to 'many'.

例: Yes, I really like my school because it offers rich resources. For example, we have a well-organized library system, and in addition, many professional professors and tutors support us.

提案: Focus on grammatical accuracy, such as subject-verb agreement ('school provides'). Use clearer linking words and avoid vague phrases like 'some UMM supported files' without explanation. Be more specific about resources.

例: Yes, definitely. The school provides various learning resources, including digital materials and research databases. Moreover, the professors are very professional and supportive.

提案: Avoid filler words like 'uh' and try to use more descriptive vocabulary. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and make your answer more engaging.

例: My school is located on a hill, which makes the environment very scenic and peaceful. Therefore, it provides an excellent place for both studying and relaxing.

提案: Avoid using words like 'literally' incorrectly. Use clearer linking words and more precise vocabulary to express your ideas. Also, try to make your sentences more concise.

例: I believe interest plays a crucial role in studying because without it, students may struggle to concentrate and feel exhausted.

× In addition, we also have a many professional professors and tutors.

✓ In addition, we also have many professional professors and tutors.

The phrase 'a many' is incorrect because 'many' is a quantifier used with plural nouns and does not require an article 'a'. The correct form is 'many professional professors and tutors'. Removing 'a' fixes the singular/plural issue.

× because the school provide the students any learning resources including the digital ones and some UMM supported files for doing researches.

✓ because the school provides the students with any learning resources including the digital ones and some UMM supported files for doing research.

The verb 'provide' must agree with the singular subject 'school', so it should be 'provides' (subject-verb agreement). Also, 'provide' is usually followed by 'with' when indicating the recipient. Additionally, 'researches' is uncountable and should be 'research'.