Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is largely unrelated to the question and unclear. First, respond directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or a brief statement). Then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words (for example, because / when / so). Keep it natural and limit to at most five sentences. Pronunciation and sentence construction need attention so the examiner can follow you.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I learned to ride it when I was about six years old, and I often rode it to visit my friends in the neighborhood. Because my parents encouraged outdoor activities, I spent many afternoons cycling in the park.

提案: Your answer attempts to respond but has grammar and word choice errors. Start with a clear statement (Yes/No + brief reason). Then give one specific reason or example using a linking word (for example, because / for instance). Use correct collocation (e.g., “popular” not “acceptable”) and keep it concise and coherent.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For instance, in cities you can see bike lanes and bike-sharing stations, which makes cycling a convenient option.

× How do I ship? Did I take over data?

✓ How do I say this? Did I understand the question correctly?

The original contains unrelated and unclear phrases that do not answer the examiner's question. This is a sentence structure error because the student did not produce coherent, context-appropriate sentences. Suggested corrections replace 'ship' and 'take over data' with a clear, relevant clarification: 'How do I say this?' if the student is unsure how to express themselves, or 'Did I understand the question correctly?' if they are checking comprehension. Improve by listening to the question, pausing to think, and using simple clarification phrases such as 'Could you repeat the question?' or 'Do you mean...?' to ensure responses are relevant. (Grammar problem type ID: 26)

× Yes, I think by acceptable in my country.

✓ Yes, I think they are acceptable in my country.

The original uses the incorrect preposition 'by' and lacks agreement between subject and verb. The corrected sentence uses the plural pronoun 'they' to refer to 'bikes' from the question and the adjective 'acceptable' with the appropriate copula 'are'. Improvement suggestion: ensure correct prepositions (use 'in' for location) and match subject and verb forms; practice forming simple subject-verb-experience statements like 'They are common in my country.' (Grammar problem type ID: 11)