Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: The student did not answer this question at all and merely repeated the examiner's question. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no and brief detail), then add one or two specific supporting details using linking words. Keep the total to no more than 3–4 short sentences and use correct grammar and vocabulary (e.g., past tense for childhood).

例: Yes, I had a bicycle when I was a child. It was a small red bike with training wheels that my parents bought for me when I was six. Because I lived near a park, I rode it there almost every day and became quite confident riding without training wheels by the time I was eight.

提案: The student attempts to answer but has problems with clarity, grammar, redundancy, and coherence. To improve: start with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No + brief reason), correct grammar (e.g., "not widely used"), avoid repetition, and use linking words (because, however, therefore). Provide a specific example or comparison and finish with a concise concluding phrase. Also choose appropriate vocabulary ("public transportation," not "pub public").

例: No, bicycles are not very popular in my city because public transportation is cheap and convenient. For example, most people prefer the bus or subway for commuting, especially during bad weather. However, cycling is more common among young people for exercise or short trips.

× Did you have a bike when you were a child?

✓ Yes, I did have a bike when I was a child.

The student's repetition of the examiner's question is a sentence structure issue: it does not answer the question. Provide a complete response with subject and auxiliary verb. Use 'Yes, I did' for emphasis and 'when I was a child' to keep tense consistent. Suggestion: Answer the question directly using the past simple (did + base verb) and include a short supporting detail if desired.

× No, not not widely used athletes in my city 'cause my city is a small city and the pub public transportation here is quite convenient and people willing to take the public transportation like bus, like subway to their.

✓ No, bikes are not widely used in my city because it is small and public transportation is quite convenient, so people are willing to take buses or the subway.

Multiple problems: sentence fragments, word order, extra words, and missing verbs make this a sentence structure error. Specific issues addressed: remove duplicated 'not', delete the incorrect word 'athletes', correct 'pub public transportation' to 'public transportation', change 'people willing' to 'people are willing' to include the verb 'are', and replace informal 'like bus, like subway to their' with 'buses or the subway'. Use 'because' instead of ''cause' for formal correctness and maintain present simple for general facts. Suggestion: Keep sentences concise, include a verb for each clause, and use parallel structure for listed items (buses and the subway).