Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer merely repeated the examiner's question instead of responding. To improve, give a clear topic sentence stating whether you had a bike, then add one or two specific details (age when you got it, how often you rode, or a short memory). Keep it natural, avoid redundancy, and limit to about 2–4 sentences. Use a linking word if you add details (for example, “and” or “when”).

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was seven, and I rode it to school almost every day until I was twelve. It was a red bicycle with a small basket, and I have fond memories of riding with my friends on weekend afternoons.

提案: Your answer is short and contains grammatical errors. To improve, start with a clear opinion (e.g., “Yes, I think so”), then support it with specific reasons or examples (who uses them, for what purposes, or how common they are). Use correct grammar and linking words such as “because” or “for example.” Keep responses concise (2–3 sentences).

例: Yes, I think bikes are very popular in my country because many children and adults use them for short trips and exercise. For example, in my city you can see students cycling to school in the mornings and families riding in parks on weekends.

× Yes, all the child used.

✓ Yes, all the children used to.

The student used the singular noun 'child' where the plural 'children' is required because 'all' refers to more than one person. Additionally, the sentence likely intends to express a past habitual action, so the correct structure is 'used to' followed by the base verb (implicit 'have' or 'ride' depending on meaning). If the intended meaning is that many children had bikes, say 'Yes, all the children used to' (implying 'have bikes') or more clearly 'Yes, all the children used to have bikes.' Use 'children' for plural and 'used to' for past habitual actions.