Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be direct but use correct tense, add a brief supporting detail and a linking word. For example, correct the verb tense to past, give a short description or reason, and keep it within 1–3 sentences.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used it to ride to school and explore my neighborhood, so I became quite confident on the road.

提案: Answer the question directly about bikes (not about yourself), use appropriate grammar, and provide a reason or example with a linking word to make your response coherent.

例: No, bikes are not very popular in my country because most people prefer cars for convenience. For instance, public roads and long distances make cycling less practical for daily commuting.

× Yes, I have a bike.

✓ Yes, I had a bike.

The examiner asked about the past ('when you were a child'), so the student should use past tense. Using present tense 'have' is inconsistent with the time reference. Use 'had' to match the past context. Suggestion: pay attention to time markers in the question and change present tense verbs to past tense accordingly.

× No, I am not popular.

✓ No, I don't think bikes are popular in my country.

The student's reply 'I am not popular' responds to the wrong subject: the examiner asked about bikes in the country (plural noun, general statement). The correct response should refer to 'bikes' and express opinion, not the student's personal popularity. Also the negative opinion uses a reporting phrase 'I don't think' or 'Bikes are not popular'. Suggestion: refer to the topic in the question and use appropriate verbs for opinions (do/think) or adjective with the correct subject.