Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 回答太简短，缺乏细节与连贯性。建议先用主题句直接回答，然后补充1–2个支持句说明例如什么时候有、是谁送的、你常去哪里骑或骑车给你带来的感受。使用连接词（e.g. because, so, when）使句子更流畅。控制在最多5个句子内，避免重复。

例: Yes, I did. I got my first bike when I was about seven, as a birthday present from my parents. Because our neighborhood was safe and quiet, I often rode it to the nearby park with my friends, which helped me become more confident and independent.

提案: 回答过于简短，没有说明原因或举例。建议先给出直接观点，然后用1–2个具体理由或例子支持，比如谈到交通拥堵、环保意识增加、城市自行车道或共享单车的普及。使用连接词（e.g. firstly, moreover, because）来组织观点，使回答有层次。

例: Yes, I do. Bikes are quite popular, especially in cities, because many people use them to avoid traffic and save money. Moreover, the recent growth of bike-sharing programs and dedicated cycle lanes has made cycling more convenient and widespread.

× Yes, I did.

✓ Yes, I did.

该句为对过去时问题（Did you have a bike when you were a child?）的简短肯定回答，语法正确，无需修改。

× Yes, I do.

✓ Yes, I do.

该句为对一般现在时问题（Do you think bikes are popular in your country?）的简短肯定回答，语法正确，无需修改。