Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical and word-choice errors. First, directly answer the question with a clear topic sentence (Yes/No). Then add one or two short supporting details (who gave it to you, how often you rode it, or a memorable experience). Use correct vocabulary (bike, not buy) and simple linking words like “and” or “because.” Keep it concise (max 5 sentences).

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. My parents bought it for me when I was seven, and I rode it to school and to the park almost every day. Because I practiced a lot, I became quite confident and even joined neighborhood races once in a while.

提案: You merely repeated the examiner’s question instead of answering. Start with a clear opinion (Yes/No) and support it with specific reasons or examples. Mention factors such as city traffic, cycling infrastructure, cultural attitudes, or common uses (commuting, exercise). Use linking words like “because,” “for example,” or “however.” Limit to up to five sentences and avoid repeating the question.

例: Yes, I think bikes are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short commutes and exercise. For example, in big cities there are dedicated bike lanes and bike-sharing schemes, which makes cycling convenient. However, in rural areas fewer people use bikes due to longer distances and limited infrastructure.

× Did you have a buy when you were too?

✓ Did you have a bike when you were a child?

The student used 'buy' instead of the noun 'bike' and 'too' instead of the phrase 'a child'. This is an incorrect word choice error and specifically involves pronoun/word misuse in context. The correct sentence aligns with the examiner's question. Suggestion: listen for the word 'bike' and respond with the noun form; replace 'too' with the correct time/entity phrase 'a child' to match the past reference. Note: If categorizing strictly by the provided list, this error involves incorrect use of pronouns/words (ID 12).

× Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

✓ Do you think bikes are popular in your country?

This student sentence is identical to the examiner's question and is grammatically correct. No correction needed.