Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: 你的回答太简短且缺乏细节。应给出主题句并补充一到两句具体信息，例如你什么时候拥有自行车、它的类型或你如何使用它。尽量用连接词（例如"when"、"because"、"and"）使回答更连贯。保持回答不超过五句。

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about eight years old, and I used it to ride to school and play with friends in the park. Because it had training wheels at first, I felt more confident learning to cycle quickly.

提案: 回答含糊並且不自然。應直接表明立場並提供具體理由或例子，例如現今交通變化或不同地區的差異。使用連接詞（例如"however"、"because"、"for example"）來組織理由，使觀點更有說服力。回答保持簡潔且具體。

例: I think bikes were more popular in the past, but they are still used today in some areas. For example, older people and students in smaller towns often cycle, but in big cities many people prefer cars or public transport because they are faster and more convenient.

× Uh, yes, maybe last century.

✓ Uh, yes, maybe in the last century.

原句缺少介词短语“in the last century”来表明时间范围。这里学生想表达“也许在上个世纪”，英语中常用介词in来引入表示较长时间段的时间状语。因此应在last century前加in。建议多注意表示时间段时介词的使用，例如：in the 1990s, in the 19th century等。