Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Be careful with tense and grammar, and make your answer more natural and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence in the past tense, then add a brief reason or plan using correct future tense and a linking word. Avoid unnecessary words and keep to at most 3–4 sentences.

例: No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child. However, I would like to get one in the future once my parents allow me, because it would give me more independence and a healthy way to exercise.

提案: Give a clear, direct opinion and support it with specific reasons or examples. Avoid irrelevant or unclear statements (e.g., gender and 'activals' are confusing). Use linking words to connect your points and correct grammar. Keep it to 2–3 sentences.

例: Yes, bikes are quite popular in my country, especially in cities where people use them for short trips and commuting. For example, many students and office workers cycle to save money and avoid traffic.

× No, I didn't have a bike when I am a child, but in future I will prefer to take a bike after allowing my parents.

✓ No, I didn't have a bike when I was a child, but in the future I would prefer to get a bike with my parents' permission.

The original sentence mixes past and present tenses incorrectly: 'I didn't have a bike when I am a child' should use past tense 'was' to match 'didn't have' (Past tense issue). 'In future' is nonstandard in English; use 'in the future'. 'Will prefer to take a bike after allowing my parents' is unidiomatic: 'would prefer to get a bike with my parents' permission' correctly expresses preference and permission. Suggestion: maintain consistent past tense for childhood statements and use natural phrases for preference and permission. Grammar problem type ID: 5

× Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country but I didn't know about the information of bikes as I am a girl and I like only activals.

✓ Yes, I think bikes are popular in my country, but I don't know much about bikes because I am a girl and I only like animals.

This sentence contains tense inconsistency and incorrect word choice. 'I didn't know' (past) conflicts with 'Yes, I think' (present); use present 'I don't know' to match current opinion (Present tense issue). 'About the information of bikes' is unidiomatic; use 'know much about bikes' or 'have information about bikes' (Incorrect sentence structure/word choice but falls under present tense here because tense was inconsistent). 'Activals' is a misspelling of 'animals'; correct to 'animals'. Also reorder 'only like animals' to 'I only like animals' for natural word order. Suggestion: keep present tense when stating current opinions and use correct vocabulary and word order. Grammar problem type ID: 6