Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevapta dilbilgisi ve akış sorunları var. "when I child" yerine "when I was a child" demelisiniz. Ayrıca ikinci cümlede kısa ve doğal bir genişletme yapabilirsiniz; örneğin bisikleti nerede sürdüğünüzü veya onunla ilgili bir anınızı ekleyin. Cümle sayısını 1–3 arasında tutun, gereksiz tekrar yapmayın ve uygun bağlaçlarla anlamı genişletin.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. I used to ride it around my neighborhood every evening, and I often rode with my friends to the park.

提案: Bu cevap hem genelleme hem de kaba ifade içeriyor; sınavda olumsuz stereotiplerden kaçının. Daha dengeli ve destekleyici nedenler verin (örneğin altyapı, iklim, toplu taşımaya bağımlılık). Ayrıca dilbilgisi ve bağlaç kullanımına dikkat edin; "I think" ifadesini cümlenin başında veya sonunda doğal bir şekilde kullanın. Cümleleri 2–3 kısa cümleyle (konu cümlesi + nedenler) sınırlayın.

例: Not particularly. While some people enjoy cycling, many prefer public transport because cities are crowded and there aren’t enough bike lanes. I think improving cycling infrastructure could make bikes more popular.

× Yes, I had a bike when I child.

✓ Yes, I had a bike when I was a child.

The sentence is missing the article 'a' before 'child' and the verb 'was' to link the subject and the noun. This is a subject complement construction using the past tense of 'to be'. Use 'was' because the subject 'I' requires the past form. Suggestion: include the verb 'was' and the article 'a' to form 'I was a child'.

× I used to cycle it.

✓ I used to ride it.

The verb phrase 'used to' is followed by the base form of the verb, not an -ing form. 'Cycle' is acceptable but 'ride' is more natural with 'bike' in English. Also, 'it' is unnecessary after 'ride' but can remain. Suggestion: use 'used to ride' (base verb) and omit the unnecessary pronoun: 'I used to ride a bike.'

× No, I don't think so, because in my country we don't do sport much and Turkish people is lazy I think.

✓ No, I don't think so, because in my country we don't do much sport and Turkish people are lazy, I think.

There are several issues: 'do sport much' has incorrect word order — use 'much sport' after a negative, or better 'do much sport' -> 'do much sport' is acceptable but 'do much sport' follows negative; more natural is 'do much sport' -> better: 'do much sport' or 'do sports much' but correction uses 'do much sport'. The main grammatical error is subject-verb agreement: 'Turkish people is' should be 'Turkish people are' because 'people' is plural. Also punctuation/word order: insert a comma before 'I think' and move 'much' before 'sport' to sound natural. Suggestion: change 'is' to 'are', reorder to 'do much sport' or use 'don't play many sports' for even more natural phrasing.