Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your response simply repeated the examiner's question instead of answering. To improve, answer directly with a clear topic sentence (yes/no or short statement), then add one or two specific supporting details using a linking word. Keep it natural and under five sentences. For example, say whether you had a bike, mention who gave it or how you used it, and include a brief reason or memory.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle my parents bought me for my seventh birthday, and I used it every day to ride to my friend’s house. Because the neighborhood was quiet, I learned to ride quickly and felt very proud of it.

提案: Your answer gives a basic opinion but is informal and slightly repetitive. To improve, start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words (however, but, because) to organize your supporting detail. Be specific about where bikes are popular and why, and avoid repeating words. Keep to no more than five sentences and use appropriate vocabulary.

例: Yes, bikes are still quite popular, especially in rural areas. However, in cities most people prefer cars or public transport because distances are longer and roads are busier. In contrast, bicycles remain common in villages for short trips and farming chores because they are cheap and easy to maintain.

× Yeah, but you can only see it, mostly see it in rural, rural sides of the country.

✓ Yeah, but you can mostly only see them in rural areas of the country.

The original sentence uses the singular pronoun 'it' to refer to 'bikes', which is plural; this is an incorrect use of pronouns (match to plural noun). Also word order and redundancy ('rural, rural sides') are awkward. Use the plural pronoun 'them' to agree with 'bikes', place 'mostly' before 'only' or better 'mostly only' as preferred, and replace 'rural sides' with 'rural areas' for natural English. Suggestions: ensure pronoun number matches the noun (singular/plural) and avoid repeated words or uncommon collocations.