Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevap doğrudan soruya yanıt vermiyor; sadece soruyu tekrarlamışsınız. Doğru yapı: kısa bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (evet/ hayır ve neden), ardından 1-2 kısa destekleyici cümle ekleyin. Bağlaçlar (because, although, however) kullanarak nedenleri veya ayrıntıları bağlayın. Ayrıca gereksiz tekrar ve duraksamalardan kaçının.

例: Yes, I did. I had a small red bicycle when I was about seven because my parents wanted me to learn balance. Although it was old, I rode it every day after school and grew very fond of it.

提案: Cevabınız fikir veriyor ama düzensiz ve tekrarlar içeriyor. Daha net bir konu cümlesiyle başlayın (Yes/No/Partly) ve sonra nedenlerinizi mantıklı sırayla bağlayın. 'Because' ve 'however' gibi bağlaçları doğru kullanın; spesifik örnekler verin (şehirler, altyapı, hava koşulları). Cümle sayısını 3-4'te tutun, gereksiz dolgu kelimelerinden (uh) kaçının.

例: Generally, I would say bikes are not very popular in my country because there are few dedicated cycle paths and traffic can be dangerous. However, in some cities their use is growing due to rising health awareness and bicycle-sharing schemes.

× It's changed, uh, where you are, but I can say it's not that common in my country because, uh, there is no cycle ways in my country.

✓ It's different where you are, but I can say it's not that common in my country because there are no cycleways in my country.

The error involves 'there be' construction and count noun/plural form. 'There is no cycle ways' mixes singular 'is' with plural 'ways'. Use 'there are' with plural nouns. Also 'It's changed' is unnatural in this context; 'It's different' or 'It's changed where you are' is unclear. 'Cycleways' is commonly one word or 'bike lanes'; ensure plural agrees with 'are'. Suggestion: use 'there are no cycleways' or 'there are no bike lanes.'