Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Give a fuller, natural response with a topic sentence and brief supporting detail. Use 2–4 sentences and include a reason or short explanation, using linking words if needed. For example, mention family circumstances, safety concerns, or interest to make your answer specific and logical.

例: No, I didn’t have a bike when I was a child. My family couldn’t afford one at the time, and I lived in a busy city where my parents worried about traffic. Instead, I usually walked to school or took public transport.

提案: Correct grammar and vocabulary, and give specific supporting details. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why with examples or comparisons. Use linking words such as because, for example, or however to make your answer coherent.

例: Yes, bicycles are quite popular in my country because many people use them for short trips and exercise. For example, cities have bike lanes and rental services, so students and office workers often cycle to work. However, their popularity varies between urban and rural areas.

× Yes, is a bubbler in my country.

✓ Yes, bikes are popular in my country.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and omits the subject and correct noun. It appears the student intended to say that bikes are popular. Use 'bikes' (plural noun) to match 'are' and include the subject; 'are' is the correct present-tense verb for the plural subject. If the intended word was 'popular' rather than 'bubbler', replace the incorrect word and ensure subject-verb agreement: 'bikes are popular in my country.'