Bike— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Cevabınız anlaşılmıyor ve İngilizce değil; Part 1 sorularında doğrudan, açık ve doğal İngilizce cümleler kullanmalısınız. Konu cümlesiyle başlayın (evet/hatta/ hayır), ardından gerekli detayları bağlaçlarla ekleyin (for example, because, so). Ayrıca cevabınızı 1-3 kısa cümleyle sınırlayın ve gereksiz kelime tekrarından kaçının.

例: Yes, I had a bike when I was a child. It was a small blue bicycle with training wheels, and I rode it around my neighborhood every afternoon. Because my parents lived nearby, they often watched me and helped me practice until I could ride on my own.

提案: Cevabınız kısa ve parçalı; daha doğal ve akıcı olmak için tam cümleler kullanmalısınız. Önce konuyu net cevaplayın (yes/no + kısa neden), sonra bir veya iki destekleyici detay verin ve bağlaçlar kullanın (because, however, although). Spesifik örnekler veya karşılaştırmalar ekleyerek içeriği zenginleştirin.

例: Not really — cars are more popular in my country because they are more convenient for long distances and families. However, bicycles are common in some cities where traffic is heavy and people prefer cycling for short trips or exercise.

× Send chojukan san nerdabi sikita bind.

✓ I don't understand what you said.

The original sentence is unintelligible and does not form a grammatical English sentence. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) because there is no recognizable subject, verb, or object in English. Suggestion: Use a complete sentence with a subject and verb, for example 'I didn't have a bike when I was a child' to directly answer the examiner's question, or if the student did not understand the question, say 'I don't understand the question.' Ensure proper word order (subject + verb + object) and appropriate tense.

× No, because usually. Driving a car.

✓ No, because people usually drive cars.

The original reply is fragmented and lacks a proper main clause and correct word order, making it a sentence structure error (ID 26). 'Because usually.' is a sentence fragment and 'Driving a car.' is a non-finite clause that does not function as a complete sentence. Suggestion: Combine into a full sentence with a subject and verb: 'No, because people usually drive cars.' This fits the present-tense general statement required by the question and uses correct subject-verb structure and plural form for a general statement.