T-shirt— Part 1 採点レポート

提案: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical errors and unclear phrases like "ease of year." To improve, use correct grammar and clearer expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and natural.

例: I wear T-shirts regularly because they are comfortable and suitable for the weather.

提案: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid redundancy and improve coherence with linking words.

例: Yes, I often buy T-shirts with different designs. I especially prefer ones with cartoon prints because their vibrant colours attract me.

提案: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and use linking words to connect your points. Also, avoid incomplete sentences and improve vocabulary usage.

例: Older people in my country prefer wearing T-shirts because they are comfortable. Unlike jeans or leather jackets, T-shirts made of soft cotton material are more popular among them.

提案: Your answer is confusing due to unclear phrases like "stitch frogs" and "when I was kicked." Use simple and clear sentences to describe your childhood experience. Also, check for correct word usage and grammar.

例: Yes, I wore T-shirts every day when I was a kid. My mom used to make them for me using soft cotton fabric.

× Well, I regularly wear T-shirts because I find it comfortabl an ease of year.

✓ Well, I regularly wear T-shirts because I find them comfortable and easy to wear.

The adjective 'comfortabl' is misspelled and should be 'comfortable'. The phrase 'ease of year' is incorrect; it should be 'easy to wear' to correctly describe the T-shirts. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'T-shirts'.

× Yes, I frequently buy T-shirts of different designs and unique print on it.

✓ Yes, I frequently buy T-shirts with different designs and unique prints on them.

The preposition 'of' is incorrect here; 'with' is appropriate to describe the designs on T-shirts. 'Print' should be plural 'prints' to match 'different designs'. Also, 'it' should be 'them' to agree with the plural noun 'T-shirts'.

× I've personally prefer cartoons print on my T-shirts that have very vibrant colors which attracts me.

✓ I personally prefer cartoon prints on my T-shirts that have very vibrant colours which attract me.

The phrase 'I've personally prefer' is incorrect; it should be 'I personally prefer' to match subject and verb. 'Cartoons print' should be 'cartoon prints' for correct plural noun usage. 'Attracts' should be 'attract' to agree with plural subject 'colours'. Also, 'colours' is the Canadian spelling.

× Well, older people love wearing T-shirts because of comfort. They do not refer to wearing jeans and leather jackets or denim jackets or Poly esters.

✓ Well, older people love wearing T-shirts because of comfort. They do not prefer wearing jeans, leather jackets, denim jackets, or polyesters.

The verb 'refer to' is incorrect here; it should be 'prefer' to express choice. 'Poly esters' should be 'polyesters' as one word. Also, commas are added for clarity in the list.

× Did mainly prefer to wear T-shirts with cotton and. Soft material.

✓ They mainly prefer to wear T-shirts made of cotton and soft material.

The subject 'Did' is incorrect; it should be 'They' to refer to older people. The sentence is fragmented; 'and. Soft material' should be combined properly. 'Made of' is added to correctly describe the material of T-shirts.

× Yes, I wore T-shirts every day and my mom always stitch frogs with cotton fabric when I was kicked.

✓ Yes, I wore T-shirts every day and my mom always stitched frogs with cotton fabric when I was a kid.

The verb 'stitch' should be in past tense 'stitched' to match the past context. 'Kicked' is a typo and should be 'kid'. Also, 'frogs' may be a typo or unclear, but kept as is since no instruction to change meaning.